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" U Lick 2"
  by ...Da Futurist Fort...


Not a Diss ...It's Realistic
Still 90% Won't Metaphorically Get it




¡¡ OH yeah what they said !!

following along trying 2

[Right] something –EXACT--

.-.

seeking reactions
comments, nods & accolades

a carbon copy

lighting striking twice?

.-.

stealing thunder --riding tails
that ‘ME 2’ complex

just killing the MOOD
executing the live FEELING

a worthless response

.-.

horrible attempts
useless words --bad duplicates

can’t follow blueprints

or trying to grab fame
or hate to be prose upstaged

want STARS on your page?

.-.

the batter has been served
you have to put your finger

DEEP in the mix—Write?

add sweeter versions
acting like you’re expanding

--SOUR additives--

BUT it backfired
not even a lukewarm glance

not a 2nd chance

1st impressions shock
some part 2’s usually flop
A lesson learned—STOP!!

it’s too much icing
excessive licking of plates

.-.

??Must you take the cake??


stolen flavored scoops
cheap imitations??---- Not cool

---Originals RULE---

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Date Submitted: Jun 12, 2009 (02:50 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (3)
  Afroditee
10/23/09 (04:50 PM) 
LOL...still doling out the sarcastic metaphoric lessons....tee hee. 44 views and 2 comments before me. Did they get it? LOL

  MzSpoon aka "T...
06/12/09 (03:32 PM) 
This was so funny and on point...you just don't know! You got to showcase this, please?!

  --->QUEENPIN O...
06/12/09 (03:01 PM) 
ctfu!!! @ originals rule....u damn write...lol....lmao @ the bg...i could hear the Mr. Me Too song fitting to this joint as well...what the hell did u read that spawned this???...oh wait...prolly everything huh??? lol

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