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"u wanted a response so......"
  by KID008
  - This Poem is a response to the poem ~READ & PLEASE RESPOND~ by deja`vu


I dont kno wat ta say bout dis dude....
either he'z braggin bout wat he can git
ya ta say.....or maybe he cant hold hot
water like a baby.....u a good missez....
if I waz u I'd go crazy, cuz I cant have
people knowin wat I say on da daily.....
especially on here, hiz homie probably aint
da only one knowin.....hiz homie probably
saw or heard n' went through da whole site
showin......if I waz u, I'd tell him private stuff
in person, cuz I wouldnt want hiz homiez goin
through hiz notez lurkin or searchin.....bein
nosey like rosey iz a new type of hurtin, if
sumbody spreaded ma biz I would say it aint
workin or give dem a hurtin, courtesy of ma fists
........wat kind of man iz he n' wat livin man gossipz
about anotha guyz gurl, maybe datz an upgrade in
da 08' world......u want ma word, I say crush him,
break it off n' tell him ta show dat ta hiz friend.....
at least he'll be able ta say he kissed n' told ta da end.....
n' if ur her man n' u readin dis n' u want beef, all I'mma say
iz read da message from da gunz befo u go ta sleep....

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Date Submitted: Mar 01, 2008 (11:35 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (3)
  Lips
05/17/08 (04:42 PM) 
yea like the others said it was some great advice, diggin the flow completely

  chriswifey
04/06/08 (12:08 AM) 
yo datz some good advice keep up da good work

  deja`vu
03/02/08 (12:07 AM) 
aw...im diggin this poem boo...it's going on my fave list...thx

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