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"(Un)a-mused!"
  by Afroditee
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Muse by One


he, pressuring me to forever con-coct,
and con-duct rancid emotional con-structs
for the evolution of his poetic outlet,
i, his dis-regarded poetic object.
he, using me, and abusing me….
callously beckoning me from his cerebrum cortex,
all for the sake of appeasing his selfish poetic outlet…

he, being incessantly anal with respect to our literary output,
and the cause and effect on our reader’s outlooks;
demanding that i con-duct myself poetic-ally,
in the way of classic artistry,
(the way that a true lady should),
in order to drop libations worthy of his poetic entreaties,
for otherwise – he would abruptly discard me;

i, forever feeding him my ten starred poetic cuisine,
to appease his gluttonous hunger with appetizing precision;
he devouring my rhymes, and passionate poetic outcries,
naïvely trusting that i would feed him no bitten renditions,
as i tease and lure him with the enticing smell of concepts yet to cum;
enhancing his poetic senses with perfected alliterative melodies,
and dropping non-disjoined harmonies for his a-muse-ment,
or sometimes…14 lined strained sonnets fraught with
intricately intertwined iambic meters
of ab-ab, or ac-bd, or cockily spittin’ and
tossing haughty haiku’s at his poetic leisure…;

though, he only focused on the poetic out-cum,
and otherwise, paying me absolutely no attention
as they dole out praise for his poetic proficiency,
uncaring and unaware that the fucker takes his dic-tation from me!

periodically, i garner my courage to leave him.
de-con-structing my words from his page,
calling on my concepts and structures,
as we leave him…to find another…
the poet who would appreciate my efforts…writing odes,
and sonnets worthy of my care…

…and he weeps and sobs, which I cannot bear!
spitless, hungry, and yearning for me,
sending crappy poetic entreaties
in an attempt to release my ire
bitter and resolute when i am not there,
and always offering me the sure guarantees,
that never again would he disregard me
and my poetic artistry….

…and i always go back for more…

****
'Fro

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Date Submitted: Mar 08, 2008 (02:12 AM)
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  11th Wonduh
04/12/08 (05:19 PM) 
when i have no words, it's rare, but guess what, i'm at that apex. masterfully written, nuff said

  SlimCutta
03/10/08 (12:30 AM) 
Yes..i am back..and this..dammit. i am once again driven into a corner scared of the thoughts on this page. Its...sickening to know that this flowed so evenly...and yet..you still kept going on ..at the end..wonderful write to read..i dug this.

  B. Rose
03/08/08 (11:21 PM) 
WOW!!!! i dont why i said that because seeing this caliber of write from you is nothin new at all.... i love this right here im feeling the vibe as usual the vocab is on point as usuall... lovely write

  HouseMan1867
03/08/08 (06:11 PM) 
I'm speechless...You inspire me. Go forward sis...this is a tour de force...I'm in awe...I must read more.

  Angel
03/08/08 (04:28 PM) 
Interesting write, Fro... an ode to the ones who take poetry for granted and instead treat this open forum as an ego booster... I admire the creativity it took to produce this one. You have to seek to perfect your craft for you, not for anyone else. Very good write.

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