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"Unconsciousness"
  by PoeticSoulja


Bad Horsie - Steve Vai

Doomed to dance in fields of damnation
Electing incompetent candidates to run our nation
Must people be granted with the power to ruin our country
Our citizens are eager to complain about what they spawned
Careless voters truly exemplify the meaning pawn
Ready yourselves for the offspring of pure stupidity
Armed with unbelievably pointless propositions
Citizens need to begin showing curiosity towards candidates
Yearn to avoid sharing the Roman Empire's tragic fate
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Date Submitted: Oct 04, 2008 (09:41 PM)
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  Kirby
02/15/09 (11:13 PM) 
short and to the point....great write

  Kirby
11/18/08 (06:21 PM) 
great piece

  Lady Shandz
11/09/08 (07:21 PM) 
great job at addressing political issues. of course, another 10 (nothing new!! lol)

  mZ*p03+!K k0T0...
11/07/08 (08:39 AM) 
i see you still blazen that pen up diggen this most def "armed withunbelievaly pointless propositions" hot line

  D Benitez
10/27/08 (12:58 PM) 
"Ready yourselves for the offspring of pure stupidity Armed with unbelievably pointless propositions Citizens need to begin showing curiosity towards candidates Yearn to avoid sharing the Roman Empire's tragic fate" Very thought provoking piece.. the picture ... everything was well put together great truthful message

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