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"Understanding Woman"
  by inmymindseye


She is the one who stands by his side day afta day. She supports all his hard work away from home with no complaint to say. When he puts her down with words so harsh. She simply tells herself it's because his day was so hard. When he puts his hands on her in anger and hate, she wont put up a fight, she just cries alone in the dark of night. When he believes she cant see past his lies, she's just sitting there trying to not cry.
She knows what he's doing, but she's hoping he'll see, theres no other woman quite like she. She's the understanding woman with a love so pure. She doesnt hate or despise, she only cries while her minds being torn apart, blood leaking out from her broken heart. She tries to understand his playing ways, so she can endure till better days. After years of neglect and abuse, he can now look in her eyes and no longer find emotion inside. This beautiful mind he destroyed, now theres nothing he can do to fill this void.
So this understanding woman walks away, his beggin and pleading can't make her stay.To long he let her endure his bad habbits, No longer can she stay and stand it. This understanding woman wipes clean her slate. To all the men who've done her wrong she'll never hate. With timid eyes and a gaurded heart, she shearches for her brand new start.
~o.b.m Charity~
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Date Submitted: Jul 24, 2008 (09:10 AM)
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  DeepThinker7
11/13/08 (07:46 PM) 
A very insightful work. From a man to a woman... thank you! Respect!

  Silk305
09/17/08 (11:35 AM) 
DAMN!!!! that was beautiful. I'm speechless to a sense. Your expression were so tremendously passionate to were it completely swept me off my feet. Great Poem!!!!! 10... 10... 10... Fav.

  Nubian Princes...
08/26/08 (02:43 PM) 
It couldn't have been said any better. This was deep, real and 2 the point. It was everything. Much love and keep doin wat u doin

  PhAsEs
08/26/08 (02:19 PM) 
bravo bravo bravo i think all men need to really read this one fo real! ten starszs

  LyricallyDelic...
08/26/08 (01:13 PM) 
A woman does because she can...well said.

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