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"UNFINISHED BIZ"
  by LIL TOINE


I MET YOU AT CHURCH
I THOUGHT YOU WAZ A GOOD BOY
UNTIL WE DID OUR DIRT

MOM DROPPED ME OFF AT YO HOUSE
FOR GOOD CONVERSATION
NEVA THOUGHT IT WOULD END
IN DA UNEXPLANABLE FORMATION

YOU STARTED OFF NICE,
TALKING ALL SWEET
TALKIN HOW YOU HEARD BOUT ME
AN COUNT WAIT 2 MEET

YOU KNEW I WAS UP FOR IT
THATS WHY YOU CHANGED THE CONVERSATION
FROM GOOD THINGS
TO SCHOOL AN THEN SEXUAL SENSATION

KISSING ON MY NECK
CARESSING ME SOFTLY
YOU KNEW I LOVED IT
SO YOU JUMPED ON TOP OF ME

YOU WENT DOWN AND OH HOW I LOVED IT
EXSPECIALLY DA WAY YOU BEGGED FOR IT

ON TOP I WENT
PLEASURE AND PAIN
ALL MIXING TOGETHER
DAMN IT WAS INSANE

FROM THE SOFA TO THE STAIRS
DA HALLWAY TO YOUR ROOM
MAN I'M TIRED
BUT I KEEP RIDIN JUST FOR YOU

UP AGAINST A WALL
MY FEET NOT ON THE GROUND
BOY YOU BEATIN IT SO GOOD
WHILE I'M YELLING PUT ME DOWN

BUT I'MA LEAVE THIS POEM UNFINISHED
JUST LIKE OUR WORK
BECAUSE NEXT TIME I SEE YOU
BEST BELIEVE WE GOING TO FINISH OUR DIRT
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Date Submitted: Nov 17, 2007 (11:52 AM)
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  KINGLO
05/23/08 (06:51 PM) 
that was hot

  letmesaymmmm
02/19/08 (07:02 PM) 
PARADOX HERE ,,,, BUT F@#K THE SOPHISTICATED WORDS .. U R HOT,,,, UR WORDS R APPEALING ... VERY CREATIVE,,, DAMNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

  letmesaymmmm
02/19/08 (07:01 PM) 
WOW

  mindbenda
02/19/08 (06:07 PM) 
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  Zykier
12/17/07 (03:24 PM) 
tite shit here i loved it. specially the unfinished part. i got some you can read but i like this 4real keep dat writin flowin

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