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"Unfinished World"
  by sexy.beautiful.22


Like a broken bottle on the sidewalk

cracked in two...I felt empty

dripping with desire to

scream from the highest rooftops

but afraid of the poems and stories that I write.....

being chained....to the walls of unprotected...unloved...unwelcome

is what it is on the written format....

I seem to stand alone

without a friend in the world

to walk me through the pain

of wanting to end my life....

Is this normal to feel this way

this tragedy that has striked me in this

unfinished world....
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Date Submitted: Aug 20, 2009 (01:15 PM)
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  MAVRICK
09/28/09 (06:44 AM) 
questions of a normal being walking through this veiled so-called reality...this realm is where we bump our heads, due to all the illusions and blinding emotions that create doubt and strive to take us off our path of consciousness...so..yeah..its normal to feel the way you do...So go ahead...Kick Fear & Guilt in the ass and tell them to GET TO STEPPIN!..haha...PEACE!

  drybaggij
08/20/09 (02:06 PM) 
jive, vulnerable. yet strong? idk.. I liked it.

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