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"UnFOOLISH"
  by DaddysGirl


Definition: the absence of intelligence
Possessing characteristics of relevance

Irrational Behavior
Idiotic & Imprudent
Basically, Stuck on Stupid
All traits of

F
O
O
L
I
S
H

Deceived by habitual lies
Blurred vision obstructing a translucent disguise
Emerging from the daze
Suspicions raised
Ignorance no longer bliss
Consideration has become remiss
Same Ole' disappearing act
No more excuses to "explain" the lack
Catastrophe looming about
Repeated tries {Giving benefit of doubt}

Clueless

Unaware

O
R

Don’t even care??????

Unfulfilled promises to be there
When not shared, pain too much to bear
‘Settling" is the new standard
MUTUALLY Requited Love, like chivalry- a thing of the past
Frustration & Let Downs… far too

V
A
S
T

Duped-Bamboozle-Hoodwinked
Tempted
Teased
But never pleased

Recurring attempts
Dwindled patience
Over & Over Again
The SAME non sense
Yet expecting a change
Teetering INSANE

Fingers point, placing blame
Emotions lead
Feelings follow
{Domino Effect}
The truth, increasingly difficult to swallow

Incompetent & reckless dealings
Enduring consequences of mismanaged feelings
Completely neglectful & inattentive
Repercussions Severe & Damage Extensive

Reminiscent thoughts laced with regret
Expectations yet to be met
Reflections reveal underlying hurt
Forcing & Faking just won’t work

Trying to regain senses
Reclaiming that which was relinquished
The power to decide
As symptoms of idiocy subside...

~UnFoolish~

Instrumentals Foolish - Ashanti

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Date Submitted: Oct 24, 2008 (10:43 PM)
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  .Mase Da Rula.
06/02/09 (01:22 AM) 
*headnods to this track* still one of my favs.... do not know the backstory in which this piece was written but I do wanna say whatever it was...truly must been something.. cause this is a nice piece of poetry... well done... well done

  icnicn2004
05/20/09 (09:32 PM) 
This is great.

  Laneice_18
05/15/09 (01:24 PM) 
U DID IT AGAIN GOOD WRITE 10*

  BrEeZyWrOtE
05/14/09 (05:43 PM) 
this is a lovely poem. i love the strength and truth that radiate from the screen( i was going to say page). very nice write. don't fall for those lies your better than that

  Why
04/12/09 (02:35 PM) 
nice write beautifully written you got your point across. 10 stars....

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