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"Unforgettable"
  by BabyBoySpik
  - This Poem is a response to the poem WORK DAII by PhillyQT


Damn
Itz 5:00 and im at the crib
Dont got a job to paii for where I live
Layin wit my girl who just got me fired
All bcuz her azz wanted to take me higher
Now im layin here in this heated state of mind
About to go off, just waitin for the right tym
Finally she said sumthin to my surprise
"How you feel"
And I knew it was tym
"How the fuk you think" was the first thing I said
Knowin to myself I had much more in my head
She got all cocky nd came at me strong
I lookd at her crazii nd said, "Bitch u got me wrong"
Then out of no where her crazy azz slapped me
Actin all insane, and was ready to attack me
I looked at her fierce....and then gave her a kiss
It was never my intention to have sex wit her lyk this
Thiz pleasure she provoked had me workin all positions
All was so good az she spoke in repetition
"Baby, Oh baby, Damn baby" iz all I heard
In this session of baby makin that occurred
I pulled her hair back az she kept on wit the moans
But to make it known she had shown that I wasnt alone
She had crazii actz set asiide of her own
From bitin my lipz to scratchin mii back
Shyt was incredible az we both laid intact
This night was unforgettable
(And mii boy finally said), "thatz a muthafuqkn fact......bring tht shyt back so I can take some notes"
So I replayed the story and took some tokes..
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Date Submitted: May 18, 2007 (02:39 AM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (7)
  LadieLeoPoet6
01/26/08 (06:26 PM) 
MMmhmm i love angry sex specially the kinda thats unexpected and just happens..that always seems to be the best..:) Keep it up Cutie ure good

  Alyssa87
01/25/08 (01:14 AM) 
I like it but I wanted to see more I wish there was more...but a ggod poet always leaves the reader wanting more

  IYUNA
12/26/07 (03:21 AM) 
? wat the fuck is the ending part about? well i like that poem sex always meks tings better in that moment

  Ce-Ce
05/20/07 (10:52 AM) 
Smh...Dis wuz a gud job brah...Had me laughin wit sum of deze linez...Lolz...Angry sex huh?...Datz dat gud shyt b...Nyce job yo...N yall betta had did it up dat gud fa ol boi ta wanna take notez...Hahaha...Gud job

  Nikkz iZ DONE....
05/18/07 (05:54 PM) 
Son...thiis was mad hot...fuckiin iintense BabyBoy...viisual was liike "YEA BOII"...LolZz

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