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"Unity Supreme"
  by Embonpoint
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Connected by *Tha Scorpion*


My soul is mirrored in your expressions
When I connected with you I reconnected with me
Our alliance while uncanny, personifies perfect unity

You encourage, agitate, and compliment
Emotionally, mentally and physically
Memories of all before you . . . they simply escape me

My mind, body and soul rejoice
For in you I have found the perfect cohort
Finally not having to choose between merit, passion, and comfort

Our bodies entwined like a pastry, filled with thick sweet cream
Soft and warm, like fresh out of the oven
Even before the mesh of flesh, this was some serious luvin

A volcanic eruption flows when you penetrate
Providing your vessel much needed lubricity
Our bodies can’t get close enough, as we transcend the influence of carnality

Beautiful sex organs, our minds
Collide in a telepathic groove
A living work of art revealed, as together our bodies move

I function under the directive to fulfill you as you fulfill me
To sustain the Unity Supreme that is

US

you and me

CONNECTED

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Date Submitted: Mar 17, 2009 (08:20 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (9)
  The Clinician
09/20/09 (10:57 PM) 
You sick wit it ma. You got mad skill wit da pen. Very passionate display of writing. I can actually visualize everything you're saying.

  Ms.Pen and Pap...
09/02/09 (09:23 PM) 
This is a sassy write! This is too hott!!! Keep the pen movin!!

  getmyrevenge
09/02/09 (04:44 PM) 
i REALLY like this part "Beautiful sex organs, our minds Collide in a telepathic groove A living work of art revealed, as together our bodies move" woo hoo!

  TheUltimateCur...
07/21/09 (11:10 PM) 
Your work has a way of making my senses heighten, Hmmmnnn... Sexually suggestive yet deep and plaintive truths... Hmm I'ma say no more... Faved!

  PoetTayla
06/15/09 (04:16 AM) 
love it love it love it.. the words caught my attention, the stanzas pondered my mind and all the way till the end I held on.

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