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"Unreliable Organ."
  by Ray


Captivate me,
Classify me an unknown species,
See I couldn't stick to my thesis,
Cause your unwritten research,
Your historys like an artifact, Gotta dig it up out the dirt,
So profoundly buried within the Earth,
Or track of your mind,
He's silent, This means he's contemplating a new scandal,
His locomotion is so random,
I love a challenge,
So I refuse to allow myself to admit he is something I cannot handle,
He's the ultimate bandit,
Equipped with the cool killa walk,
The walk is perceived as steady and slow,
But is precisely paced to quickly catch up,
He stole my most unreliable organ,
Then, changed its rhythm, tempo, & sped it up,
I now play an entire new song,
I'm infatuated with him, But now I must make him factual,
Cause favorite intermixed with passion,
Never decreases in value,
Favorite is something you forever hold close to your unreliable organ,
Until you are yet convinced in the future by new temptation.
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Date Submitted: Mar 04, 2008 (11:00 PM)
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  --->QUEENPIN O...
07/21/08 (08:00 PM) 
THIS WAS A VERY INTERESTING CONCEPT..."He stole my most unreliable organ, Then, changed its rhythm, tempo, & sped it up, I now play an entire new song, I'm infatuated with him, But now I must make him factual," <--DAMN I CAN RELATE 2 THAT!

  uno nuevo
07/17/08 (03:11 PM) 
Very true, you speak your heart... keep it real though, i like

  2Smoove
04/11/08 (12:59 AM) 
love the flow and content you are writing about in this....wow this is nicely done!!

  williesidney
03/24/08 (11:40 AM) 
Good job always use that gift you have from God ten stars.

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