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"Unspoken Dreams"
  by Sirens.Soul


..twilite lost..Once a vibrant future..the past too full of pain n torture.

Where have my dreams gone? No dreams..now i live day 2 day.
..walking into your room to escape the inner torture..leavin it in the hallway..it stalks me like a Chimera.

Wounded beyond my limit..leavin bloodstains on your wall where i lean..i slide to the floor with a breathless groan.
Hide me awhile...let the world pass me by..

..Beyond Life..Beyond Dreams..Beyond Death..what will i face next?..i cant think about that anymore..Let me sleep the eternal sleep..Let me dream of still waters..of a life beyond recognition..

Let me escape this pain awhile.
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Date Submitted: Nov 25, 2008 (10:48 PM)
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  stranger
07/04/09 (12:03 PM) 
Could loss of love of a god do more than this to mere human frailty? The problem is that in our frailty we may worship the wrong god... this is a beautiful poem that reflects the deepest emotions where mankind meets God and expects happiness now, failing to love love itself first we fall into despair following humanity which has not yet solved the problem of why our deepest desire to love does not make us love [without conditions] and live in the bliss of that. This work echoes powerfully to ...
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  Duice
07/04/09 (08:58 AM) 
Sounds like you were writing from a place of deep torment in your life, nice scribe.

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