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"Until The End"
  by Stargurl07*


I wrote this poem when I had been feeling down, and in times when we think we have no one but God, and that's what it's about. God is always there, even when you claim to be alone. He's all I can really count on at times. Circumstances in life draws you to Him. When we fall, we remember Him. But I just want to remember him at all times, not only when I'm down.




Breathing somber air
Stillness of the atmosphere
Clouds slowly drifting
Mind uplifting

Heaven falling
Emotions escaping
Sinking slowly
Dying surely

A heart that’s beating
Remorse seeping
Filling my veins
Brimming with pain

Tomorrow a hope
Praying I’ll cope
Today a miracle
Feeling hysterical
Yesterday a struggle
I haven’t yet crumbled

Time the keeper
Sinking far more deeper
Life once was beautiful
Now seemingly so dreadful

And the pathways may be unknown
But I struggle to walk on my own
A maze like journey without directions
Life as I know it cannot be lived to perfection

Stumbling and falling
I always hear God’s calling
He’ll bring me through until the end
Strongly I’ll stand and I know that I’ll mend.
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Date Submitted: Sep 29, 2007 (05:08 PM)
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  AjthePoet
09/29/07 (08:59 PM) 
As people say on this site "Wordplay on Point!!" great use of words, combining thought with flow. Also like the style you have here, the quick short verses are affective, and personally i like that style, brings the ease of reading in my eyes. Well done..

  Ms. Hollywood
09/29/07 (05:42 PM) 
with god there is hope. it always has been... " but i struggle to walk on my own" and " Life as I know it cannot be lived to perfection" i really liked those lines throughout the poem. this piece was def written to a T. (means good)

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