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"Until Tomorrow"
  by DaDutchezz


so yall mite not get this...today at skoo i wrote a new part in each class to represent how i am feelin or how i in some way relate...kinda confusin but ill jus let ya check it out


lines and shadin
whites and graying
my life in art
lines dark
like Van Gogh
leavin my mark
but takin it slow

advertising my life
pictures and adds
packin my bags
learnin the trade
tenison so thick
you can cut it wit a
knife

cirlces...triangles
mending the mangles
untwistin the tangles
my life as bangles...
17 and 25...
add this..subtract that...
life lik a problem of math
multiply the pain
divide the combat

they always say
without yesterday
there is no today..
american history
MY hiSTORY...
battles...
no one too foolish of
prattle

studyin the extorier
wonderin bout the interior
somewhat inferior
full of wonder...
optic this...
otic that...
just stop...
slow down!
SHIT!
let me take this shit in
bit by bit!

FINALLY!
a break...
let me sit back..
relax...
n think!!
seems lik as soon as i wake
more journeys to take...
in between never a break!
lik rite now!

ok...
im almost done...
"no prepostions alex"
"use proper english miss"
the battle almost won
by...
who??
ME!!!
that shade of blue...
changed...
BRITE!!
VIBRANT!!
GREEN!! :)


wats that i hear...???
no..not fear!!
FINALLY!!
relief!
no more grief...


until tmrw...

but im livin in the moment,
time well spent...

until tmrw


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Date Submitted: Aug 28, 2007 (07:33 PM)
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  Quiet Storm
09/01/07 (07:48 PM) 
i like this, it's creative and thoughtful and just altogether well written...nice write, gurl, keep up the good work (oh! and u're getting 10 starz 4 this)

  Anto
08/31/07 (05:45 PM) 
ur write is different but i like it gud write...

  Prolific
08/29/07 (03:43 PM) 
you amalgamated education and life so well that it was hard for me to decipher which was which. good job. --Prolific

  mal91766
08/28/07 (08:10 PM) 
before I say anything, I wanna let you know that you're getting a 10 on this..why? cuz of many reason :)..see you've come up to us, with a type of poetry some poets are afraid of using. What am I talking about? lol..well, think back..waaaaayyy back lol..if you notice, some of the greatest stuff (thats old as hell) doesn't make sense cuz the poet puts everything together in one whole poem..only making it shorter. I personally think that the less a poem makes sense sometimes..the better it is. :) ...
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  Bre
08/28/07 (08:07 PM) 
awww ii really liike thiis ii liike the methaphor

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