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"Untitled (11/02/09 5:45)"
  by Brokenvegtable
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Just Me And You by BrEeZyWrOtE


Forever
Our footsteps
Will sink sand
And water
Will crash
Upon us
As we
Play
Under the light
When the sun
And the moon
Reveal to us
Their comfort
In
The eyes gaze

Emotional
Yes
Heartbroken
Yes
But I fear
That’s it for me
Never again
As I hear your words
From the mouths of many
Not unlike
Every other woman
I know
To be so kind
Words that encourage
With compassion
But
Still
Their only words
Nothing solid
And my feeling
Of being alone
Is stronger
Then
The compassion
I feel

My reality
Is
Doubt
That I will
Find anyone
For me
So I cry inside
Because
I am letting
Things die
That should never be allowed
I am
Left without
A moment of peace
I am left alone
In the dark
At night
Sunless days
Clouded thoughts
I am left with
A
Broken heart
Which
Will not heal
On its own
So tears
Are shed
Because
I am
Left
Unwanted
But told stories
Of compassion
And
Hope
That I will find
That one
Not them
But another
Cause
Its not meant
To be
And yet
That’s the problem
Its always
Never meant to be
And always
Don’t worry
Just keep looking
She will come your way
I have been
Here most of my life
And now
The hour
Closes in on me
And I have less then half
Left
Almost no time
To wait
But I wont hurry love
Just need someone
To care
To give back
Something
I have lost
The feeling of
Lonely
Being
Alone
Still
Not
Gone
So here I sit
Knowing
My future
Cause I know others
And my future
Is to be
Alone
For the rest
Of
My
Life

Without
Someone
To
Love

I do regret to inform you

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Date Submitted: Nov 02, 2009 (05:45 PM)
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  Shani. Medicin...
11/02/09 (05:59 PM) 
I love the imagery in the poem especially in the beginning...it takes on such a sad and broken hearted tone which it is meant to do but it breaks my heart as I experience the resolution of being alone.

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