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"Untitled (11/02/09 6:05)"
  by Brokenvegtable
  - This Poem is a response to the poem May I? by BrEeZyWrOtE


I would love for you
To fill the hole left behind
But really can you

To say you could is one thing
So please if you can do it
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Date Submitted: Nov 02, 2009 (06:05 PM)
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  floatingonthev...
11/03/09 (03:59 PM) 
this is interesting, I like it, very to the point, and yet still leaves a lot to ponder... very demanding.. .. hey did you get my message? Haven't heard from ya, hope all is well!!!!

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