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"Untitled (11/06/09 3:17)"
  by Brokenvegtable


My tattoo
Holds my soul
Close to my heart
Words meant more then this
The image to which I bled

I am free
Felt by the skin I choose to alter
Corrupt with a possessive power
A will become a bit obsessive
As I feed off being inked like this
Meaning holds feeling to me

A statement to which I adhere
The marks of tradition
I am scared for life
By my own inspiration
This is my tattoo
An image for eyes to see
And the mind to imagine

I am who I say I am
This is my description for you
A story behind all the ink
And thus it was the pen that scared me so
I used my weapon
Against myself
To tattoo words onto my skin

I am the creator of such torment
I suffer so that my pleasure I know of
Without pain
I could not enjoy life
And so I welcome it with open arms

I am nothing more then a tattoo on the page of life
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Date Submitted: Nov 06, 2009 (03:17 PM)
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  floatingonthev...
11/11/09 (03:00 PM) 
the ending was so passionate, the last line... I mean.. I agree.. I feel that same way however, the way you said it was... just so demanding... and I love .... "As I feed off being inked like this Meaning holds feeling to me"/// especially the latter part of that.. meaning holds feeling to me... it just caught my attention.. the whole poem did, again another poem I don't know why people haven't read.. I really enjoyed this... and I love tattoos too!!! YESS!!!! nothing wrong with that!@

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