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"UnTiTled For Now {{W/ Audio}}"
  by NiK-E


Untitled 7.mp3 - NiKKZ





She lays flat on her back
Wide open
As he penetrates her without protection
No words spoken
Just the notion of bittersweet
Pleasure...becuz to her
No one can do it better than he

When he releases all that
Built up energy that's been
Kept inside of him for so long
She lays there && take it
Until it's all gone

&&

For she...it feels so good
For him tuh be...inside of her
Despite the hurt that he put her
Thru...when he gave up on tryin
Denyin...the chemistry that they both
Share...when the fact is
No other couples out there
Can compare

But i guess...he realized how much
He needed her && he realized they
Were meant for eachother
&& he apologized for the distance
He put between him && her
By...puttin it in between her

&&

Ejaculating in her
&& words come out
Oozing from his tip
&& he's not moving
Until that last drip drops
iNside her "special spot"
Where they create magic

&& it's way more than physical
Conceiving something so beautiful
Taking a hold of the mental
Reaching deep in the soul

&& this is how Poetry is born

Created...by the pen && the pad

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Date Submitted: Jun 02, 2008 (12:54 AM)
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  ROY@L CARaM3L/...
06/11/08 (10:45 AM) 
I LOVED IT GREAT WAY TO DESCRIBE POETRY EVEN THOUGH YOU HAD ME GOING FOR A WHILE BUT POETRY IS LIKE BIRTHING A NEW CHILD GREAT WRITE LOVED THE WORD PLAY IMA MAKE THIS ONE A FAV 10 STARS FA REAL

  Nilla
06/10/08 (11:03 PM) 
loved this piece, Nikkz. loved the BG and the fact that you used this concept to write about POETRY. lovely, ma. lovely.

  Wildchild
06/10/08 (01:23 AM) 
OH GET A ROOM. Us descent folk don't want to go there. This aint poetry it's porno. Put a lid on this crap.

  B.L.a.Q.
06/09/08 (10:31 PM) 
absolutely loved this, your wordplay and creativity are sick, must add to favs

  sexy.beautiful...
06/09/08 (07:55 PM) 
this was crazy passionate well written and kept my attention til the last line

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