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"Untitled.... fuck off XD"
  by Aleks


Why?
Am I sad?
Why?
Arn't I happy??
Why?
Did I choose to live today?
Why?
When i could of died of lonlyness?

Cause!
I am happy!!
Cause!!
Im not sad!!
Cause!!
The sun is beautifull!!
Cause!!
The worst way to die
Is from lonlyness..

This is the actual write....

My head is like
A bowl filled with marbles
Fuck me off
And the marbles of sanity
Will fall out
Then all the bad marbles
Will collide with each other
Making me the worst person ever

My personality
Is a WHOLE different thing
It like that weird person
You get when you go to a
Wedding or a fete
Who sits in the corner
And says nothing
Untill provoked
And will start to go
EVEN WEIRDER
Like those weird people
You get that go to the
Pub or a blue light disco
Those weird people
Who Throw their arms up in
the air and shout WOOT
COMPLETELY embarssing
YOU
Thats my personallity

My speech *silently laughs*
Is some what like
A mixture of a Chihuahua
And Shanon Noll
Really annoying and whingy
Sounding
The type of annoying sounding
Were when you hear BUT a
Second of it
You run out the room
With your hands over your ears
SCREAMING LOUDLY
Thats my speech

The music I write *big CHEESY GRINS*
Its like Grunge
Industrial
Country
Metal
And
A little pop
In reall words
A fuck load of DIRT
Mixed in 2 tonnes of OIL
6 GALLONS of blood
And straw and fluff
To keep it together
That is my music I write

The las but IMPORTANT BIT ahem*coughs*

My sanity
Its got bunnies
And rainbows
And pretty peoples
SMEARED WITH PERIOD BLOOD
HAVING SEX WITH THE EXORIST
SHOUTING "FUCK ME" REPEATEDLY
GETTING HANGED BY JESUS'S
UMBILICLE CORD
NAKED
That is my sanity

................................................

Note from the writter:
If you have with standed that you derserve a big
FUCKING standing ovation and a pat on the back.
Please for personal reasons
VOTE ZERO
Cheers Aleks
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Date Submitted: Jul 22, 2007 (10:15 AM)
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  brokensparrow
08/03/07 (06:53 AM) 
aleks, i fail to see how this is erotic. but hey, whatever floats your bout. bwha ha

  Star55
07/23/07 (04:56 AM) 
Wow. That was visual and so very interesting! Cool ;-)

  wisconsin
07/22/07 (08:10 PM) 
i lik da poem for real because its different, its not sumthing u would here everyday and it makes no sense except for that is who u are. that marbles lines, dat was killer. a bowl of marbles representin your different emotions and reality of wat maks u urself. and ur personality described as a metaphor of bein a weird person, dat ur actions may be strange, but is caused as a reaction by others' feelings toward u as a person. ur voice related to sum wat a of siren (a loud beautiful woman) but ur...
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  Jez
07/22/07 (05:34 PM) 
all I can say is Woah

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