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"Untitled"
  by Intellectual Soul


(Note-You have to read Liquid Hieroglyphics poem "Untitled" to understand this one fully)

It’s about time you broke the silence

Because I crave your entire existence

And if I’m not your soulmate

I thank GOD for allowing me the potential

Intoxicated with your mind and all of the things you do is
why I smile

Our Biology is what I’m concerned with

I was never that good with Chemistry

Niagara Falls depicts jaded images reminiscent
of all the times we spent together

Unbeknownst to you my dish began to over flow years ago

From the minute you began to sing sweet melodies of love,
trust and compassion with your words

And I want you all to myself

I won’t breathe another breath until your mine

Infatuated with your mind

I want to pick your brain like a florist does unto a dozen roses

Understand how and why your flow hypnotizes everything it touches

Your confession made me weak in the knees and my heart
sank deep down into the pits of my chest because I know your poem was meant for me

We’ve spent entire lifetimes together

We held hands in 1912

Kissed compassionately under the stars listening to the nothing but beat of our hearts in 1925

We made love in 1947

And today our souls gelled and we forever became one as a result of our unique styles and passions that has lead us to this point.

I want to feel you as I read your sentences

Slowly penetrating my thought processes
inspiring me to think deeper

No longer a distant stranger…
I’m glad the silence is broken…do you like my answer?
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Date Submitted: Dec 30, 2006 (05:43 AM)
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  liquid Hierogl...
11/04/07 (10:08 AM) 
Please forgive my tardiness, I was just browsing thru some old work and managed to see your comment and simply followed the rabbit into the hole. Breathtaking. Loved it, especially the use of time as a tool to describe the walk of love...classic!

  11th Wonduh
01/25/07 (12:41 AM) 
deep thoughts

  Chinenye
12/30/06 (08:11 PM) 
dramatically deeP :-D get @ m3..ttfn!

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