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"Untitled Love..."
A SlimCutta and mz_April Collaboration


  mz_April:

There you were,
appeared out of nowhere.
Like a superhero,
or a breath of fresh air.
You caught my attention
and reeled me in.
I didn't think I could be your lover,
much less your friend.
But still I pursued,
cause something told me to.
Divine intervention,
maybe God can see me with you.

  SlimCutta:

Illusions i could call it...
Or delusional would be better...
Noticing that you was around during my good and bad...
A Superhero yes i could be...
But with no cape and no tights..
And without a mask..
You saw through my alter-ego..
Being a friend you were..
And becoming more...
You are...
Intervention it could be..
Im asking God...what it will be

  mz_April:

only time will tell,
what you and i will become.
Two hearts and two souls,
comming together as one.
distance means nothing,
now that your in my heart.
Theses feelings that grow everyday,
I dont want them to depart.
Your the answer to my prayers,
when I thought God wasn't listening.
Ah my dream come true,
in my naughty thoughts your glistening.
For you I have an emotion so powerful,
it can only be that one thing.
God sent me an angel named Gerald
and he just left off the wings.

  SlimCutta:

April G...
Could it be just a coincidence..
Possibly God got a plan i can almost see...
Love is deep..
And love is strong..
Feelings are expressed..
And yet i doubt we are wrong..
Composed of more than words..
Actions create a different world..
Becoming a realm of two becoming one..
Setting the sun on us...is all but done..

Easily a fluke many will call it..
But we see it as a chance to catch it..
The fever we both had before..
We are floating...feet off the floor...
So lets just name this write untitled..
Since we are both loving it...and unsure what we can call it...
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Date Submitted: Jul 11, 2009 (03:55 PM)
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  DonPoetiq
10/16/09 (03:28 PM) 
Hey there SIster. God Bless you, and yours. What's popping Sis? I love this collabo...And, I love you too..Nuff said, Don't be a stranger...Be Well, and Be Faithful/Peace

  sexy.beautiful...
09/26/09 (09:20 AM) 
wow, you two have done an amazing job on this collab. I liked the line illusions i could call it or delusional would be better noticing that you was around during my good and bad...overall nicely done

  Darkfon
07/27/09 (02:12 AM) 
nice write, yall harmonize on this lol, keep it up

  Young Street P...
07/23/09 (05:33 PM) 
i agree with the previous comments....both of u used 2 different styles...nice work slimcutta.....april you kno u good 4 it.....i fuccs widit yall.....10 no questions asked.....love is a funny thing and like the mind...it's also a terrible thing to waste....LMAO...keep the pen moving ya feel me

  (Floetic~One) ...
07/16/09 (07:00 PM) 
yall did a wonderful job with this piece... great flow between you two... i enjoyed reading this one. 10 starz

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