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"Untitled"
  by AzIz


*A sistah is really rusty, but is trying to get the mojo/muse back...it's been a while. This is an off the top exercise-Thx for the read*

Lives intertwined makes it
difficult
to mind her business
Closeness
of split checks, make-up sex, and sharing dreams
bring
yet many things are still HIS
Independence confirms his death grip
lists
all the things he dares for love to change
transitioning "I" to "we" doesn't seem to come ez
TEN months, FOURTEEN days and counting...
each sifting grain of sand
stands
for the reasons why they should and should not continue on
hues
of brilliant blues lace their relationship
competing with happy moments that others can't help but to be jealous of
Love
so obviously read in his eyes, her smile
their kiss
but bliss is not left lonely, misery keeps flirting
Lives intertwined makes it
difficult
to mind her business
Thoughts of ending this
or just TO BE CONTINUED...
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Date Submitted: Jun 06, 2009 (01:33 AM)
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