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"(Untitled)"
  by J-City305


(No Title really was just Venting)






I sit and remember,
Reminice on the days,
The years,
The times,
When you,
Beeing so simple,
So kind,
So precious,
So loving,
Gave to me,
When you yourself had nothing,
I never until now thought to appreciate what youve done for me till now when it is to late,
To kill,
And murder one like you,
To hurt some one who only wanted to love,
To rob some one so precious,
To murder someone so fragile,
By the ones closest to you...
Day in and Day out i see you cry,
No sign of life in you at all,
Its like they stole your soul,
Mom im tired of seeing you cry,
Every single morinng i wake up with hate in my heart because they stole you from me and left me with nothing but a dead corpse and memories,
When me and you used to be,
And when you was,
My mother,
My mom,
Nadine Muzac,
I Miss You...
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Date Submitted: Nov 07, 2009 (12:01 AM)
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  daria
11/09/09 (11:25 PM) 
thats the best by i ever seen from somebody sexii lik u

  ThepureBlackpo...
11/09/09 (09:01 PM) 
Dam son, right fist beating the left side of my chest after i got to the end...and wow i beat it once more, Cuz it hit right there in the heart.....Welcome to GS my brother....Yes sir welcome, what an entrance....We call that GRAND>>>>>SLAM

  Showcase
11/09/09 (12:40 PM) 
This was special to me because I can relate, it has been just about five years since my mom passed and I alaways tell people you are nothing without that woman in your life. I'm a walking example this was very touching and heartfelt and I loved it pEACE.elevate

  ToCute4U
11/08/09 (11:15 PM) 
So damn deep, I love it, I love it, you showing your emotions in this write, keep it up and be blessed, very talented young man.

  blakkrose
11/08/09 (07:15 PM) 
Emotionally power surqe piece. Reminds me of a poem by B. Yung. Be the maqician. Brinq her back from that.

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