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"Untitled-Dedicated to Him"
  by Mr. DID


I had you in my hands but you slipped right through my fingers
Now the only thing that I have is your essence that somehow seems to linger
Its sad because you my sun that gave light to the flowers in my life
You were my moon, both full and bright, that danced with the stars at night
You were the rain that quenced the desert of my dry beating heart
You were my key when my tears had me under lock
You were my rock that kept me grounded when he wind began to blow
You were my favorite teacher in my favorite class that caused to learn, understand and know (lol)
Now because you are gone Im falling endlessly waiting for arms to fall in
Waiting to fall in your arms once again so the sprialing falling would end
Day by day...
Minute by minute...
Second by second...
Heartbeat by heartbeat...
Breath by breath...
Maybe Im stupid but I will wait for you with every breath that i have left
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Date Submitted: Sep 14, 2009 (06:03 PM)
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  1225
09/17/09 (12:34 PM) 
wow!! this is sumthing to picture. sumting to think about. its so beautiful and nice. I lOVE IT!! (lol)

  LakotaPoet12
09/15/09 (09:32 PM) 
i loved it...this was a great very expressed poem came straight from the heart and thanks for blessing me to read this poem...imma giv eyou a 10

  kdawg
09/14/09 (08:52 PM) 
i enjoyed this write! Very loving...I can feel all the emotion flowin through it. Keep em goin!

  angelistic
09/14/09 (07:07 PM) 
check out my poem complete. its a simple response

  angelistic
09/14/09 (07:06 PM) 
ahh that so sweet. i love it definitely a fave. i'm sorry if you lost your special person but this is a great write. keep writin a definite 10 but u already kno that.

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