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"Untrue pt.2"
A Doughboy and ~Unpredictable Nature~ Collaboration


  ~Unpredictable Nature~:

Remember when you said you would die for me?

Shit,

I guess those words were lies to me...

You saying you leaving cuz you need privacy

Nigga WHAT???!

Dough, we been thru everything together,
you taking this and throwing 6 years, forgetting how I use to stand out in the cold weather...

...HUSTLIN' YO SHIT!!!!!

you telling everybody that I cheated
how I got pregnant with another niggas baby, now the love for me in your heart is deleted.

I was there when no one else was
doing this shit alone when yo ass got locked up for fucking with yo stupid ass cuz.

You got me screaming
tears streaming
I'm PLEADING......

DOUGH!!!!!!!! PLEASE DON'T GO!!!!!!!!!!!

******knock, knock, knock, knock******

you looking at me like who the hell is knockin on the damn door.........

  Doughboy:

WHAT YOU TALKIN BOUT... !!
FOR YOU I WOULD'VE DIED
I GUESS THAT WAS JUST LIES.....

LET ME TELL YOU SOMETHING UN !
FOR YOU I TOOK LIVES!!
PUSH MY PRIDE TO THE SIDE
FOR U ...
I CHOSE U,
TO COME HOME TO ...
ANY BITCH WOULD HAVE BEEN HAPPY TO HAVE A NIGGA LIKE ME BOO...
AND DONT TALK ABOUT MY CUZ,
THATS MY FUCKIN BLOOD
POINT BLANK FAMILY IS THE ONLY PLACE I SEEM LOVED......

AND YEAH I TOLD MUTHA FUCKERS YOU CHEATED
MY LUV AINT NEVER DELETED
BUT YOU CAN ACT LIKE MICHAEL AND JUST BEAT IT!!!
CAUSE SEE IT'LL BE THE SAME WAY, IF I WAS THE ONE THAT CHEATED
THAT SHIT HURT WORSTER THAN A NIGGA THAT SMOKE AND GET A BAG HEAVILY SEEDED
AND IF I DONT STOP HERE THEN THE CYCLE WILL JUST BE REPEATED
SEE YOU WAS ALL I NEEDED
THE EQUATION WAS COMPLETED
NOW IM THE MAN VERSION OF KEYSHIA COLES SONG
" I SHOULD'VE CHEATED "

YOU HUSTLIN MY SHIT !! ( LOL )
I'M GLAD YOU SPEAK OF THAT...
CAUSE AS A MATTER OF FACT
I CHECKED MY MATH THE OTHER DAY AND YOU AINT TOUCHED JACK....
I HEAR SOME NIGGA DROPPIN OFF PACKS..... IN A WHITE CADILLAC WITH WHITE RIMS TO MATCH
WAIT !!
WAIT !!
MY NIGGA NITO PUSH THAT...
ALL HELL NALL !!!!!!!!
NOW THE SHIT ALL COMING INTO PLAY......
THATS WHY THE NEIGHBORS SAID " I LIKE YOUR NEW CAR THE OTHER DAY "

" KNOCK, KNOCK, ......
DAMN UN,
GET THE DAMN DOOR....
WHILE I TUCK THIS BRICKS IN THE FLOOR
WHAT YOU LOOKIN CRAZY AT ME FOR
NOBODY KNOW IM HERE, IM IN A RENTAL CAUSE I HAD TO MAKE MY CAR DISSAPPEAR




  ~Unpredictable Nature~:

Walking over to the door

my heart about to hit the floor
and as I turn the knob..
*deep breathing*
OMG!!!

"Hey Girl...!"

It's prettysugar10
and thank GOD for her presence when the door opened!

"You ready", she asked

"Ready for what?", I replied

shruggin her shoudlers like she didn't know
but in allthis chatter, I see her looking over at Dough..

"What's wrong BIG BRO?"
"MANN!!!, Iont know"........(rubbing his head)

and my feelings
I now try to pick up off the floor

grabbing my things
I lean in for a goodbye kiss
my lips touching the air because of his dismiss
"Well I'll see you later on when I get back."
"Aiight" (stil rubbing his head) as he looks out the window and sees the cocaine white cadillac

then.....



(I was going thru to delete my pieces and stubmled upon this one here..this is one that me and Dough never finished...he got busy with the court system...but we were workign on Chapter 2 of this one.. I wanted to post what we had so far..... iIss ya boy....)
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Date Submitted: Aug 09, 2009 (11:31 AM)
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  msnita
10/08/09 (12:47 AM) 
When I was reading his page I saw this and the date I almost lost it !!! I mindlessly thought this was after all a bad dream whew!! this I could have continued to read, it was sounding just like him as I suppose he would have. Oh, is this true? LOL

  big josh
08/29/09 (02:46 PM) 
this was hot . nice

  ~~~Prettysugar...
08/18/09 (01:23 AM) 
damn sha.. this messed me up in my inbox.. i still wish he was around.. 120p

  piss a mofo of...
08/13/09 (01:44 PM) 
my sentiments are the same as Syn and DL i had to step back for a second and remember where i was at...this brings back emotions..

  D.K Lord of Da...
08/09/09 (01:57 PM) 
See this got a nigga all choked, i saw this post from Dough and im like wtf...UN my love goes out to you, as always Dough was a special kat, & he pen was wild as he was he truly could kraft & move that pen as shown here.. Bows Head thanks for sharing this with us all. Amazing piece of prose for Dough and yourself.. Hit me up if you need to chat Im always still here for yo... Much love always DK

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