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"Us-No More."
  by bumpy


We don't share the same bed anymore
We don't live within one another's hearts
We can't share the same space anymore
Torn; damaged and dismayed, we are forever broken apart
We won't live the same life; walk the same path
We will stray far from each other
We fight the beating of our hearts; the unrhythmic motion that beat the same-we once had
Us No More
Love conquered, demolished, restructured, broken again; we pitifully attempted to restore.
We becomes you and I.
Us becomes his and hers.
They becomes never again...anymore.
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Date Submitted: Nov 22, 2008 (12:40 AM)
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  RedLoveSong
11/22/08 (08:16 PM) 
I can totally agree with this, lady...great write.

  That_NIce_Guy
11/22/08 (10:38 AM) 
I feel where you are coming from in this poem...I couldnt have put it any better. 10 Stars

  Abstinence
11/22/08 (08:40 AM) 
i really enjoyed reading this piece thanks for sharing

  B. Rose
11/22/08 (12:59 AM) 
Damn yo... its sad when it coms to that... HEY!!! but it sometimes it doesnt workout the way wed hope... and this would be th result yo... nicey written

  TWANGINU
11/22/08 (12:45 AM) 
WOW..VERY DEEP WRITE BABY..SOMETIMES ITS LIKE THAT..BUT WHAT CAN YOU DO WHEN IT GETS LIKE THIS 10 STARS

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