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"Valuable"
A Ciara and Big B00 Collaboration


  Big B00:



As I select a tune
To fill the room
And seduce my mood
To contemplate

My mind digests its food
And not to be rude
Or Misconstrued
I animate my language to demonstrate

How deep ones mind must be
In the forensics of understanding thee
Immeasurable treasure bestowed upon me
The value of which exceeds my imagination

Deeper than the deep brown of my lovers eyes
Sparkling back brighter than the reflection in them of I
Even to a junkie its more valuable than one million highs
The value of which goes unjustified in my evaluations

I took it to Jacob the jeweler of jewelry
The brokers on Wall Street
Pawn shops, hot spots, black market fences on the street
I was told it much more than a ring, but something i can invest in the future

What a beautiful treasure worth more than i can buy
Lifted up more than a junkie can get high
Appraised for days
With eye brows raised
Envoking the question ...............why?
Why have i been blessed with a treasure whose value i cant fathom because its worths so high

  Ciara:

The tune u chose is soothing to the soul
Its helping me to relax but im so excited
I cant help but to think about this thing I came to confide in.... u...with
but i cant control myself or hide it

This is the ultimate treasure
Im so nervous with this
cause none of my other valuables can measure.
Its literally one of a kind
I swear to u there's no other 1 in the world like mine...
... and thats the magic word..."mine"

I cant believe I shared this with u
Im so out of my mind, I dont know what else to do
When u took it to all those places, and they looked at u with those eyes on the prize faces...
I knew this was too good to be true...
I held the most valuable treasure in all the universe, and to think...
all this time, thru all the hurt, i thought i was cursed.
Why me? is the question... how can i be the guardian of the most precious possession..
I need your help and guidance because I dont want to taint this blessing...

Help me with the treasure that even the richest of rich dont own
the kind of treasure even the king of kings and the queen of queens would de-thrown their own to have...
We laugh...
cause "we" share this treausure...
...the ones that were looked over and told we wouldnt amount to nothin
given bad names cause our mothers, fathers, sisters, and brothers were junkies, and flunkies, and named the world's biggest dummies, i guess cause they said the apples dont fall to far from the tree, that was supppose to be the destiny of u and me...
but..guess what? its not... cause God trusted us with this treasure so deep, even we cant understand the depts of its value;)

  Big B00:

God blessed man and woman once before
And disapointed and sore
God swore.....
That we would wander the wilderness in search of more

I have found that missing link
That chest of golden dablooms from beneath the sea
That treasure of the oldest antiquity
Been here since the beginning of time and entrusted to me

By you.....

Gaurdian of its profound beauty and infamous lore
Its immense wealth that even the rich woulld kill, and the poor would die for
I am beside myside with the joy
like that of a young boy
getting his first kiss , what bliss.
As the nay sayers, haterz, and rattle snakes in the grass ...hissssss

I once believed that i knew what this was all along
But as each day moves on
And the stocks in this investment rise strong!
I realize that it knows no bounds, as infinite as space and time and twice as long

Dont be nervous with that treasure,the find of our lifetime
I'm here to complete the chest, help protect, and when needed interject, believe me we'll do fine
In awe at the thought of your most precious, working hard to see it even if I was blind
So beautiful like the song of a hand crafted golden music box... it eases the mind

To know that its there, and fills us up like a lovingly prepared meal
This treasure is beyond monetary worth, beyond sight, beyond feel
Its existance is enough to make you strive for more in every deal
But not to keep to ones self but to share and help heal

Those who have been hurt
During their many works
In search
Of what we still dont fully understand the worth

Only knowing that beyond our imagination
It can extend our emotional limitations
As long as we remain true
What a joy this treasure i have found in you

And with my life i will equally guard it
Untill i am dearly departed
Medicine like your smile
It can heal the broken hearted

  Ciara:

Im trustin u with somethin thats deeper than my heart and proves to be all my love.
Not knowing what u'll do with it,
will u choose to take care of it til your last breath or abuse it.

This treasure is so precious i was skeptic about giving it to u.
But your heart and love is just as genuine so I know your sincerity is too.
Ur my best friend and Ive never put this kind of trust in man
but your different, even though i hesitated to put this golden dish in your hands.
The demand for this treasure is high, but only 1 can possess it
..hold it and cherish it...
..and in return it gives u the desires of your heart...
the desires that surpass heights of moutains and depths of the seas
given u everything including the last breath from me...



  Big B00:

You present me with this holy Grail
A treasure so vast and yet so frail
My every intention is to preserve all it entales
Knowing in the end the new era Knights templar shall prevail

Before i would except your last breathe I would plea to go with you
As long as im near you death is no issue
Even as a cloud of energy with an "other worldly" glow
For the treasure you posess beyond the reaches of time i would go

It will be cherished and held
i shed my cocoon as just a man so we can excell
Eating your ambrosia from that golden plate
The desires of my heart is ...your heart I feel its fate

This treasure has fused itself to my life force
Only when given unto me, not taken with force
Therefore i have no choice but to tend to this ever growing treasure
Becuase if it dies then so do I, so i take every precautionary measure

I promise this gift is safe with me too
Just as safe as it is with you

  Ciara:

(Smiling) I knew there was a reason i decided to share this gift with u...
Maybe "U R" one of the greatest gifts given from God to me;)
When u feed me with your poetic thoughts of your love for me, it sends me to the sky with so much bliss..
but I must say...
There hasnt been anyone in 20 years that I would trust with a gift as great as this.

~The gift of my soul~

U must admit, there really isnt anything that could compare to being this valuable;)
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Date Submitted: Jun 28, 2008 (02:53 AM)
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  leethal
09/27/09 (09:25 PM) 
this scribe had sum very beautiful ink flowin thru it! it has that feel of a couple exchanging their wedding vows! very nice drop u2

  Ciara
06/29/08 (10:53 PM) 
Thanks everybody.. we really appreciate it.. and BOO, u know u r an amazing write/artist/poet... I always enjoy doin work with u;) thanks again for being patient with me;) i give us 100strz...lol cause i know we put our all in this piece.. it turned out beautifully;)

  T.J.STA
06/29/08 (09:10 PM) 
I had already rated this poem and it's very good!!...Nice collabo by tha both of u...I give it 10 STARS for just expressing y'all true emotions in a good way, kno whut I'm saying? So yeah, 10 STARS!!

  touchdapearl2
06/29/08 (08:55 PM) 
awwl my god you 2 flowed so beautifully in this piece!this felt like that cant be true love here,im at a lost for words this poem could bring tears to your eye's!

  Magic✯
06/29/08 (04:30 PM) 
wow this iz a beautiful piece. both of you did yall thang here... felt the love within this piece. i enjoyed it. 10starz

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