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"Vampire Lady"
  by Prettysugar10


We suck young blood (Solcofn mix) - Radiohead

Sinks teeth into neck… bulging veins open
Devouring ~der doolb~… reversing the flow
Of life
Nutriment needed
Indeed
Nocturnal mammal
Immortal living a human’s life style
Strolling clubs for food before sunrise
Meeting dinner better yet snacks
Greedy appetite makes taking what I want
Relentless …
Serial killer with no good intentions but to feed…

Life insurance is needed when you’re in my nocturnal view
Seductress of the night going about life without hopes or want for nothing else
But death … it surrounds me
Crowds my better judgment
My beauty doesn’t help,
the allure it comes with
Conquers
The unsure…

Wishing for rest from internal doom…but until then
I MUST COMSUME
DOOLB…pt1
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Date Submitted: Aug 09, 2008 (01:34 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 08/10/08 (04:56 PM)
Author: ASW
Poem Title: Sanguine Soliloquy

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comment icon  COMMENTS (11)
  me-me
01/28/09 (05:07 PM) 
yes maam you so killes this piece and im loven it this is def a 10 ma

  P-Dub
08/19/08 (11:56 PM) 
aww shit now. . .we suck blood! hahaha can't wait for part 2

  ASW
08/10/08 (04:55 PM) 
This is hot...I have a thing for vamps. I found some old ink that i thought would be a good response....hope you enjoy. As always honest comments are always welcome....peace

  KNYNE
08/09/08 (03:08 PM) 
bite me...j/k seriously, what a wonderful eerie and hauntin' piece as the night cries and delves into the thirst of a vampire. such an opposing side with purpose. it compliments a piece called "stalked" that i wrote. keep feedin' on the souls of the mortals so that i may hunt you.

  Doughboy
08/09/08 (10:06 AM) 
lol.... Seductress of the night going about life without hopes or want for nothing else, but death.. it surrounds me, Crowds my better judgement, My beauty doenst help!!! lol Yo, you wild ma!! but that shit tight! step into another level with this write!!!!! a fav !!

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