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"Verses from the Visual"
  by →Thousandth*Shawdow©


He likes flowing hair
Mesmerized from the strands down
to the feet stood on.

But the inner me
shall not be seen therefore I
Shall be passing by





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Date Submitted: Jul 31, 2008 (01:04 PM)
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  Jenesis
08/06/08 (10:09 PM) 
ahh i like the concept behind this...i feel the same way...sometimes it better to just live in the moment rather than worrying about what may happen...on the other hand things do have consequences...but sometimes it is best that we not worry about them...great write in so few words...10 points for this one definatly =)

  XGMGrand
08/06/08 (04:16 PM) 
So few words but it def had a really strong meaning that i wasnt expecting. But brevity is a sign of genius, i really liked this piece :)

  DL Martin
08/05/08 (01:17 AM) 
every haiku of yours I read always offers food for thought. This is no exception. Brings some of my own guidelines to mind...

  KingArt
07/31/08 (08:10 PM) 
I really like this piece a lot. I wonder how many beautiful people I have passed by because I chose not to look deeper. NICE!

  DAKING!
07/31/08 (07:47 PM) 
Wow folk this real short, I digg your creativity. Good Work!!

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