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"Victim V"
  by AR-15


Soon Youll Understand (Instrumental) - Jay-Z

(If you haven't, please read The first four parts of the Victim series, )

It was penicillin, and her meth addiction
That sent her to an early death with no revision
I dropped to the floor asking God why
And how much wrong will I see with my own eyes
Days moved on, the funeral, reflection
So much confusion and so many questions
To be left for me unanswered and without a trace
An investigation was needed but it didn't take place
I want to her doctor for current medical problems
He said she was raped and the case was never resolved
Just when things couldn't get worse than they could be
The doctor informed me that DNA had belonged to Lee
Two criminals dead and another case that's cold
A story that never ends its unfold
Lee was tested to have HIV
If he raped her, she would've gained it more than likely
Doctor says she didn't have it
Wow what a relief
But then his expression changed
Relief turned to mis belief
And that's when I got the news, when I didn't expect it
She told another lie, she wasn't even pregnant
As I left the doctor's office, still feeling uncertain
That something was still hidden behind the curtain
But all that had happened had taken enough toll
I finally had said it's time to rest my soul
Driving away from this infested existence
All this torture and pain that has been inflicted
Drove me insane, at that point I became
Another victim at the expense of someone's priceless shame

THE END
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Date Submitted: Jul 07, 2008 (11:22 AM)
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  GeminiBorn
07/11/08 (12:58 AM) 
damn man. This was a nice way to wrap it up bruh. I really enjoyed all of these, but this one was the best. I like the message of sorts at the end. Respect.

  {Poetic~One}
07/10/08 (09:21 AM) 
wow this is deep. so much reality in this piece. i enjoyed reading this one. 10 stars

  beyondangelic
07/09/08 (10:01 PM) 
Damn I didn't even get a message saying that you posted this so Imma go ahead a leave my comment. This was just something that stood up to the whole Victim series. It was equally as great and I got wrapped up into your words. Ten starz of course.

  NINO
07/09/08 (11:04 AM) 
Sorry I'm late but GOT-DAMN!!! What an amazing, captivating, and innovative way to start a series...keep us on the edge of our seats throughout...and END WITH A FUCKIN' BANG. You did it, my dude. Keep scribing for real

  *~§Poetic§~*
07/09/08 (10:51 AM) 
omg i wanan just leave a paragraph comment for this one the story line was off the chain and you kept me wanting more you should do more of these shad cause i really enjoyed this and i like how you kept the tone of the poem the same and didn't jump around much you get ten frm me Poetic...

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