"Sounds more like
A snitch in the making.
Under pressure
You can hear the sound
of your will breaking.
And I know deep inside
Your pride must be aching
Afterall-
No one knows better than you
That you’re not authentic
.You just been faking" OH DAMN!!! The title... HOT, the poem, HOT, the reason behind the poem, HOT, the fact that you dropped it, HOT, at the very least it tells me that at least you're tryna prove yourself... however, the whole fake business I can pin that on so many ppl for so many different reasons, and like you said, I stay true to not making friends on line because it avoids these types of writes coming from me... this overall, was fucking HOT TO DEATH!!!
Commented on the poem "Anna." on 07/27/09 at 09:36 AM
"Shared rape stories like lollipops
A taste we never forgot
Swirled fear on the inside of our cheek" WHO EVER IN LIFE WOULD WRITE SOMETHING SO PAINFUL SO BEAUTIFULLY??? WHO??? NOBODY!!! DUDE, I AINT WORTHY OF SUCH CREATIVITY AND ASTOUNISHING WORK FOR REAL... I'M STILL SPEECHLESS!!!
Commented on the poem "Anna." on 07/27/09 at 09:34 AM
I just read this on FB and literally RAN over here hoping this was posted just so I can fav and save this fucking masterpiece that had me speechless when I first read it... Proze, this was beyond intense... every word and every sentence structure was penned so perfectly. I felt that this not only was a hard right for you, but that you also took your time with it as to make sure not to make not one mistake and to make sure that the love & pain, which usually goes hand in hand, was written to perfection... and girl, you delieverd....... BRAVO!!!
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