Commented on the poem "Martyr" on 06/28/08 at 07:18 PM
amazing..."his heart a throbbing grenade.."...but before that .."the world-waiting and wasting"...descriptive yet simple...but those two lines..capture so much...very well done
Commented on the poem "Ashes Today" on 06/07/08 at 01:38 AM
you were on something else with this one..."the words scribble away scraping as bone against gravel, the quill upon parchment.."..omg...smh...beautiful
Commented on the poem "Deadend Romance" on 06/07/08 at 01:35 AM
omg...amazing...i see with this write it seems like your poetry has matured...(not that it was immature!..lol..but u know what i mean)...with practice...growth is inevitable. This was awesome.
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Commented on the poem "Martyr" on 06/28/08 at 07:18 PM
