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"vision of love"
  by Reminisce


Sweet as honey rain drops,
dew in the morning air,
stained oil spots,
you finger softly through my hair,
our love spell lingers
fresh love scents...
sweat handprints...
i whisper teasingly in your ear,
love has never felt this good,
unknown and deprived,
I was alone.. now here you lie,
my heart died...and you revived,
I've been made whole again...
through unconditional love,
who knew this existed,
and your relentless mission,
saved me from love sickness....
captured by your heart,
protected by your soul,
I grew from your mind,
your love now i hold..
to cherish to keep,
to love you,
truly,
I'll be what you need,
I'll love you solely,
keep me in your dreams,
Love,
your FUTURE


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Date Submitted: Apr 09, 2008 (03:29 PM)
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  TheGhettoPhilo...
07/13/08 (08:43 PM) 
warm words written with soul you seem like a really sensual person

  Ryta
04/21/08 (09:49 AM) 
this was swwet ma keep it up.

  ☸۞...
04/14/08 (11:58 AM) 
this was a beautiful piece..i loved the emotion and the devotion mixed with the emmense passion that transeneded into uncontrolable love and just a fab.write...and the end was a smile bringer...this is a fav off top...wonderfully written and expressed keep it up queen cuz talent proceed's u!

  Ms. Sincerious
04/14/08 (10:04 AM) 
this is a beautiful write,.... i truly enjoyed and the ending was perfect.. nice write

  jargon
04/13/08 (12:07 AM) 
wow, it kept my attention the whole way through, lol and i don't really like love poems, but this was coo, it wasn't cliche and sappy, i felt the love, the passion, the sincerity, you have some nice lines like "and your relentless mission, saved me from love sickness.... captured by your heart, " that part really stood out but everything else was good too

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