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"Visionz"
  by Vinyl


My mind gettin kinda hazy becuz im twisted
vision gettin blurred while skimmin over scripture
think i'm seein delusions and apparitions
realizin my premonitions is nothin less than visions
Seein some of my niccaz in jail, another portion deceased
some ofe'm in hell, or the opposite side of that street
some soljaz movin to tha tempo, some catchin the offbeat
my minds eye takes me to the horizon where heaven and hell meet
and i see in that final incarceration there aint no bail for me
I slowly come bacc from my vision quest
tryin to see the light, i'll be damned, i'm visionless
then i hear a voice talkin, and i regain focus strugglin to see
they say i'm gonna make it, why i'm hooked to this IV?
they tell me i'm luccy to be livin after what jus happened to me
some hoodlums they tried to rob you, damn i was in all blue
i'm guessin its gang related, i figure they were piru
you and ya wife were shot,they say i took 4 she took 3
I say is she okay, but they tellin me she's deceased
everything fades to blacc, i can cleary see that its over
then i hear "CHANGE" in a voice that sounds like Jehovah
i awake with the tv on wit a blunt in the ashtray
wake my wife up, tell her to put my flag away
i cant endager my wife i'm bangin hard my last dayz!
I gotta slow down, cuz i aint tryina picc a grave!!
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Date Submitted: Oct 17, 2007 (11:38 AM)
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  kaylaboo
12/26/07 (01:25 PM) 
I really feeling this one

  ~mel~
10/24/07 (06:08 PM) 
DAMN LOVIN THE VIBE.. YOU PUT IT DOWN ON THIS ONE.. 10 STRZ.. VERY GOOD WRITE. CHECK MINES OUT.THANX

  ThaVirgo
10/18/07 (11:27 AM) 
that a strong vision my nig....don't let that be your future

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