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"Voicing my Opinion (in the GS Revolution!)"
  by Joey Grizz


"Pardon me Ya'll!"
Is all u hear as I make my way to the front line...
Granted, I've been a member of GS for only a short time,
But I can't just sit back and watch this abomination take place!
I refuse to keep quiet and let these liltte phonies turn GS
into sumthing so rediculously superficial, as MySpace!
So Allow me to speak my peace and voice my Opinion
GhettoSoul isn't a Contest focused only on winnin'
I dont think it's should be about battling...
so wutz really good with all that beefin on here?
This is a Poety site...so why the hell shorties in
thongs showin' off they rear?
It's a place where u can pour out ur heart,
and let the world know wut ur feelin!
it's a place where u can let out
those emotions that ur so tired of concealin'
Personally I dont write for recognition.. i write for the Lord..
I'ma Warrior of Christ, waging war against hell .. and my pen is my sword!!
We are all warriors... and our pens just so happen to be our weapons of choice
Wut do u stand for?... speak up... and let G.S and the world hear ur Voice.
To me thats the true essence of this craft.. and the reason I write!
Now, I told AC that i'm ready to ride for this site...
So while sum may abandon ship... i will pick up my pen and write...
i will do everything that i can possibly do to help win this fight...
this fight... against superficiality, phoniness, biters and petty haters!
So by voicin my opinion i join my fellow demonstrators!
And say that a change is definitely due...
So if ur a true poet... then i'm talkin to u...
Stand firm.. and VOICE UR OPINIONS...
thats the only way this BS will come to a conclusion!
I commend Bedo for providing the spark to start this revolution.
Bedo, AC, J @yboogz, ya'llz poems touched my heart dearly!
So I VOICE MY OPINION and just hope that ya'll hear me!!!!

REAL recognize REAL.. and to those true to this Craft... I SEE YOU!
Peace and God Bless!!!!!
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Date Submitted: Jan 22, 2007 (01:08 PM)
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  ♥Poetic~...
09/18/08 (06:17 PM) 
now i have no clue what poem(s) inspired this piece but we both know that this site is not up to the potential that it could be too many people on here to get some type of internet fame and not b/c they enjoy the art called poetry. "It's a place where u can pour out ur heart, and let the world know wut ur feelin! it's a place where u can let out those emotions that ur so tired of concealin'" loving the way u put that out there and i thought that was what poetry and this site was for too. The Rev...
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  Phemy
02/03/07 (06:06 AM) 
Good work Joey. Its good to know that my poem for AC has inspired others whether they wish to give me credit or not!!

  Harmony07
01/26/07 (05:08 PM) 
nyce one! totally agree.

  11th Wonduh
01/25/07 (01:59 PM) 
the real has been recognized. hot write

  J.R. Writer
01/24/07 (02:56 AM) 
Glad u chose 2 do so cuz dis is real nice man. its def. blaze

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