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"Vows to You"
A D NYCE and LaCherie Collaboration


  LaCherie:

From the first time my eyes found your beautiful face to set on....
my heart fell hard, after the first six months, you had my soul sold...
from bestfriends, to a relationship...and now this marriage...
todays the day and all im missing is a carriage....
standing here baby, i can promise you these things...
and that this marriage means more to me than just a ring...
i promise you a wife, that will hold your hand when you are afraid...
stand beside you and fight side by side, with no matter what gets in our way.
I'll run your bath water, and have dinner ready and set when you get home...
and after your hard day of work, youll never have to sleep alone.
Treasure us as a team, cause I gave up the "I's" for "us"...
never do you wrong....never tell a lie... and in me you can trust-
your secrets and dreams, goals and aspirations...
i will let you in my heart, if you'll except the invitation.
These are my vows, just a start of what I will do...
these words are more than vows baby, this is how much i really love you

  D NYCE:

From the first time your spirit grabbed mine
it wasnt you goodies i wanted, or your behind
your intellect was far more impressive than i have ever experienced
but yet i knew that this thing called "we", you wanted to experience
time passed quickly cause time flies when youre having fun
just know that i would never ever put you second to none
standing here baby i can promise you these things....
i will be your rock when you are weak and cant think
i will do you everywhere, including the kitchen sink
your heart i will hold in my hand, protecting it from all dirt and sand
WE are indestructible, thats why i have a titanium wedding band
days when im off early or i dont have to go to work
we can switch places and i will wear the "house nigga" skirt
trust is not an issue, and neither are my ex bitches after that DIC....
but you know that you are the sole owner of this "sweet meat"
and when our kids get older we will be the perfect example of true love
because we have been through almost every thing mami, and youre still my life...love
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Date Submitted: Apr 07, 2008 (02:03 PM)
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  MzFyne_N_Bless...
03/24/09 (11:13 PM) 
This is REAL...Truthfully spoken. Ten starz

  SoulofNY
02/19/09 (09:55 AM) 
This was hott right here i give props to both of you. 10 and a fav from me off top

  Jus BN Me
12/17/08 (08:53 AM) 
well done. u both flowed well togerher i dun think it could be any better.

  Taeda
12/13/08 (02:17 AM) 
This was beautiful......10 starz yall keep doing yall thing and a fav

  ButterflyDream
08/28/08 (08:01 PM) 
Very good write the two of u worked well 2gether.Not only was it beautiful there was real talk thrown n there...ur sweet meat,kitchen sink...right n the middle of your so eloquently written words-I love it 10starz

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