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"W3n I'm With Him"
  by angel2strawberry


Everday when I am In 7th hour i wait
till da clocks say 2:47 so i can hurry up and beat him down the stairs!
I try to hurry and try to call someone
so he won't notice that i am waitin 4 him
.....it works until he catches up with me and i tell the person i 2g cuz i'm...
With him =)
we walk until we get to our "Spot"
and then we stop and talk(or waste time as he say)
Every Time Were Together I some how talk him into kissing me!
he hates it when i win!
but deep down inside he loves it!
he loves it wen his soft lips touches my pretty soft lips
i try to enjoy the moment but i just can't
because i can't help to think about the fact that he's not mine!
but we act like were to gether when were not were jus bff'z....
Wen I'm with him i feel...special
i feel like i can be me around him without him judgin me!
he makes me smile(very hard)
he makes me laugh(all the time)
he give me butterflies(when he looks at me)
Wen i'm with him....nothing else matters to me
but the fact that i'm with him!
Wen i'm with him people walk by us and look and stuff
a few people ask if were together....idk why we do this but
when they ask us we look at each other and say no..(wierd right)
but i get said for that second then it's back to nothing matters!
Wen i'm with him i get mad when we have to end it and go home...
i'm actually on a punishment because i come home late everday....
because i'm with him!
when we text and he tell me he's sad i always find a way to make it betta
if i should ever get a boyfriend i don't think it will last because
i'm going to love him more then i love my boyfriend
but i wouldn't care because NO ONE CAN DO ME LIKE HE DOES!!!!
Wen i'm with him i get jealous because he be with other girls...ugh!
i never get jealous but ay3 shit happenes!
i be wanting to shoot the fuck out those girls!
but i jus stay cool and get over it
Wen i'm with him.....i don't think he knows how i feel about him(how i really feel!!)
and actually i really don't know how he feels about me because he very rarely
expresses how he feels(he's one of those...niggaz)lol
but i can only go by what he tells me and so far
i haven't heard anything i didn't like..
although we might fuss and fight or whatever at the end of the day
i just want him to know that i love him!
Wen i'm with him i wonder...is we gone alwayz be bestfriends???
that questions comes in my head every day when i see him!and
Wen i'm with him!!!!
Diz Poem Was Dedicated to my BestFriend ~~~RG~~~
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Date Submitted: Sep 22, 2009 (09:32 PM)
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  1Heart4JC
09/25/09 (08:45 PM) 
Nice to dedicate to your best friend :) I found this one is so "puppy-love" to be so sweet in yours which is also inspiring a bit. I can see some angry-emotional to hurt your feelings because whatever situation keeps you away from your boyfriend. I see that you're hurting badly & being felt hated too, & that isn't giving you a bad judgement to reject you, no. It's for your good sake to give yourself as "self-threapy" in making you feel better at least by writing it out, am I right? If so, that...
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  ReliableLogic
09/23/09 (12:15 AM) 
This pretty good. keep writing young one

  HeblessedMe
09/22/09 (10:36 PM) 
hold on to your expression, dont ever grow out of that because most adults remember what your saying how your feeling and would love to be where your at right now so I pray that one day you get your wish and scribe on young soulja your our future! one last thing dont wait on him to long because i'm sure it's some one out there feeling that way about you but you only see him.

  xRawAndFlawedP...
09/22/09 (10:25 PM) 
i like its nice seems like u like this kid keep ur head high even if u fall tho

  Poetic-Politic...
09/22/09 (10:12 PM) 
Very deep..Emotional and very personal..thanks for sharing this..I felt as if I was in your shoes while I read every line...

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