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"WAIT"
  by I_said_It


Enough is enough, I’ve been on hold for an extended time, is anybody on the other line. I sent my request in minutes ago, hours ago, honestly months and years ago. Still no answer. My prayers were mailed long time ago, not standard mail, better than that express by UPS. I know I sent my package of prayers with a stamp, nothing returned to sender, man this is a mind bender. Still no answer. Jesus I know you’re up there, answer me please! I don’t have a whole lot of faith at the present time, but I know I have more than a mustard seed and quite frankly, that’s all I need. My arm is hurting its bruised, discolored black-and-blue from casting all my cares upon you. I know I’ve completed everything I need, but let me go back over my list. Living right check, praying check, reading my bible check, fasting check, cast my cares upon you check, going to church and keeping faith check. There is nothing I missed, I’ve acquired nothing but checks on my list. Still no answer. On my knees I bowed, I feel like tossing in the towel, but my spirit is telling me hold on God will make a way somehow. It’s like I’m a cliffhanger, I’m grasping on with my last grip, and God please flip the script. Still no answ…….wait hello, HELLO, HELLOOO I hear somebody, I hear HIM. Son, son, before you called I already answered and while you were speaking, I was still listening. I’ve seen your list previous to you writing it. Of course everything was checked on your list, but on my list you forgot to check, stand still and know that I am God. It was already done because it was done in Jesus name. Yes Lord, thank you for showing compassion and answering me Lord. I look forward to talking to you again. Talk to you later Lord, see you soon son.
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Date Submitted: Sep 20, 2007 (09:49 PM)
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  KieshRenee
10/21/07 (03:02 AM) 
Great job, we all need to be told to wait sometimes. So frequently in life we rush things, and whats funny about it is that it is still going to remain the same, until God says that it's time. So anyway great write. I hope more people read this we all need to just wait sometimes! (I most say I need this alot I never want to wait I am so impatient it's nuts) 10 stars

  ReFlecTion
09/21/07 (07:56 AM) 
Another great write...it is great that you can 'check' so many things...I am still working on it.It seems like people are always giving up and not being patient but patience is a virtue...if we do what he asks then our award will come right on time and be even greater than we expected-easy 10

  PoeticDreamer
09/21/07 (12:41 AM) 
Your words are hot like fire Bro...lovin the flow..knowledged and inspirational. Much love..return the fave. - Poe

  Lo Key
09/20/07 (10:36 PM) 
very nice piece...had an even better flo than the last one. its like i was just trying to anticipate the next line to see where it was going. like trying to guess whats going to happen next in the movie...sometimes you just cant wait. this is a beautiful poem...10 starz and a fav

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