i relate to this so much because when im sittin at home waiting on that ring or that doorbell a lot of emotions and images flood through my mind like times when we were together and everything we did theres nothing like being held by the one you love i loved the write and keep doing what you do

damn, this poem is hot! real talk. i like the rhyming and the words you use. madd poetic, keep doing what chu doing, you got madd skills.

you rhymes pure and got straight to the point. i love this piece of work... keep up the good work.

The rhyming scheme was pretty solid and your words conveyed your emotions very well.I like how you got your feelings across by using a small amount of words.You should expand your vocabulary though sweetheart.I'll give this write a 9