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"Waiting For Me"
  by PoeticYungn


Throughout our relationship you've taught me a lot of lessons...
And with the help of you I recieved many blessings...
Either way you taught me something I should already know...
You taught me grasp the present don't try to predict the future and the past let go...
Forgive but don't forget and always let love show...
Some of your 101's were good but some caused pain...
But I guess some of that was all in the part of the game...
You're mouth taught sometimes but when you're actions took part my energy it started to drain...
You put your hands on me then told me why you're someone I shouldn't fear...
You made me cry then called me a cry baby to show the reason why I shouldn't ever shed a tear...
You chose strength and showed me the ropes link by link...
You pointed out my mistakes so I would learn to write in pencil instead of ink...
You showed me how to combine work and play...
And with it all you've brought new joy to me everyday...
But after all the pain you've caused with the lil joy returned...
After all YOU'RE mistakes and MY lessons learned...
This LOVE I have for you needs to be burned...
You've taken all my energy and with pain constantly coming I can't take it...
But I can't get it out my head that WE were gone make it...
So you see I'm still trying to learn how to get rid of the life planned with WE...
So I can get the many blessings that come with the life waiting for me...
2:02a 9/25/08
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Date Submitted: Sep 27, 2008 (01:25 AM)
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  pRÖdîçÅLSôn² 
10/19/08 (03:18 AM) 
dats wassup ma.. keep doing ya thang

  I Am Real...I ...
10/01/08 (12:44 AM) 
this right here n real real good i fel it nice n deep

  KiNg-Go0B3r
09/29/08 (12:05 AM) 
daammnn now this was some truth spit right here im too diggin it i got to fav

  ButterflyDream
09/27/08 (10:52 PM) 
wow this is beautiful in such a sad way cause thats true at times what keep us hanging on through the pain is trying to learn how to rid ourselves of the life planned as WE.This is deep I def feel u girl on such a personal level

  Tranquil momen...
09/27/08 (05:25 AM) 
very nice I heard once that if love cant show you something new everyday then there is no love very well done

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