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"wake up and love me"
  by JAJA12


who am i
Jacquese ......
oh really then why is it i can't see me
i sleepin wit two differnt dudes
while trying to make them feel bad i look like the fool
my life my life
its going going so fast
while the real me is going slow
Hoe wake up and see all the dudes you call yourself playin
are playin me
their taking our body
planting their evil seeds leaving
us to bear their burdens
while they walk a way from it free
wit all their dignity
taking ours along for the trip
Bitch get a grip
and slow down
before you're called the biggest how in town
Where is the resistence that used to be there
now it seems like you don't really care
Wake up
cuz if you sleep you're gonna fall in deeper and deeper til its to late
but luck for you i'll determine our fate
we'll live and be happy
and won't ever let a man use you or me
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Date Submitted: Nov 17, 2007 (01:43 AM)
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  Droe88
09/13/09 (03:20 PM) 
very great poem for weman n yung weman 2 read...i love the concept behind it... youre a very talented write good work mama

  A.C.H.
06/23/09 (02:36 AM) 
I like that this write was extremely introspective but written as if it was from both an objective and subjective. The creativity of it all was amazing! I must give you made respect for putting it out like that but the best way to come is come real. Much luv on this piece! - "the inspired one"

  O-mEGA
03/16/09 (07:49 PM) 
Dont let anyone use you for anything less than what you are worth. nice write 10+

  B-long
02/19/09 (10:41 AM) 
im def. feelin your emotions put into this piece, you captured tha view from both sides of tha story..niice B

  DeepThinker7
02/17/09 (10:04 AM) 
A different view point and much respect for your skill and written style. Job well done; nice to read different work buyt those not I am not quite familiar with from time to time... enjoyed it!

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