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"WALK WITH ME(LETS TALK)"
A krazy and MR. BYRD Collaboration


  MR. BYRD:

KRAZY, TAKE A WALK A WITH ME FOR A MINUTE SO WE CAN CLEAR OUR MINDS
AND IN TIME, WE CAN TALK ABOUT EVERYTHING THAT CROSSES OUR MINDS
NOW I KNOW IT'S HARD TO KEEP OUR HEADS ABOVE THE SURFACE
BUT THERE'S PEOPLE IN OUR LIVES THAT'S NOT EVEN WORTH THE PURPOSE
BUT WE GOTTA LEARN AND TAKE OUR ANGER AND OUR HATE
CONTROL OUR MENTAL MISTAKES, SETTLE DOWN AND SET IT STRAIGHT
I'M NOT HERE TO GIVE YOU A SECOND OPINION ON HOW YOU FEELING
WE JUST WALKING AND I LISTEN TO THE INFORMATION YOU GIVING
I TOLD YOU THAT YOU CAN VENT WITH A NIGGA WHEN YOU GOT SHIT ON YOUR MIND
YOU KNOW I CAN RELATE
YOU TOLD ME IT'S ONLY SO MUCH YOU CAN TAKE
AND REALLY IT'S ONLY SO MUCH YOU CAN SWALLOW AND TOLERATE
TO THE POINT WE JUST SNAP AT MUTHAFUCKAS AND THAT'S ALL IT TAKES
BUT AGAIN, I DON'T WANT TO BE THE ONE ON THE OUTSIDE LOOKING IN.....
TALK TO ME LIKE I'M PETEY GREENE ON THE SCENE, YOU GOT MY FULL ATTENTION KRAZY
IF YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN....

  krazy:

b-y it's so many thoughts running through my head
like how he said he wouldn't murder my heart... but guess what it's dead
and it's all my fault for listening to every lie he ever said
he told me that up with my bullshit he was fed
calling ME a cheater when for the last 3 years I've slept in HIS bed
and HIS bed only...
faithfully every night begging for him to hold me
he slept right next to me but yet every night i was still lonely
I've cried so many tears and not once has he tried to console me
and that's why I'm glad that me and you are friends
cuz it seems like even tho your on the outside looking in...
your still the only one that's listening!

  MR. BYRD:

HERE KRAZY TAKE THIS TISSUE
I BROUGHT IT JUST IN CASE
WE GOT ON A TOUCHY SUBJECT THAT YOUR EMOTIONS COULDN'T WITH TAKE
BUT YOU GOTTA BE STRONG FOR ME AND WIPE THEM TEARS
I KNOW HOW YOU FEELS WHEN YOU SHOW SOMEONE YOUR BLOOD, SWEAT AND TEARS
FOR ALL OF THESE YEARS AND NOTHING TO SHOW,
BUT YOU TELL ME YOU HAVE A BEAUTIFUL CHILD
YOUR PRIDE AND JOY TO THE WORLD
AND YOU'LL DO ANYTHING FOR HIM CUS YOU TRULY LOVE HIM
(OH SHIT KRAZY IT'S ABOUT TO RAIN....WE CAN STAND A LITTLE THUNDER)
YOU SAID YOU HAD SHIT ON YOUR MIND, SO I FIGURED WE TAKE A WALK
WE CAN STOP RIGHT HERE OR WE CAN KEEP WALKIN....

  krazy:

i think want to keep walking...
and it's making me feel better ...by talking
so if you still wanna listen i don't think I'll be stopping
see... he was suppose to love with his whole heart
but he let the little shit tare us apart
i stood by his side and all i got in return was hurt
my heart ripped out and kicked around in the dirt
he treats me as if out of his enemies i am the worst
but 3 years ago out of his loves i was the first
i gave him all of me that i had to give
i gave up my youth and gave him a kid
not that i regret that because having my son was the best thing i ever did
but shit... if only i would've known...
that his cold heart would go full blown...
and a touch from his hand...
could abolish all man...
i wouldn't be standing here pouring my heart and soul out to my friend
and b-y i just wanna thank you again...
for taking the time out to walk with me and talk to me and listening!

  MR. BYRD:

You don't have to thank me baby, the pleasure's all mine....
You got my ears it's open to you
I'm just glad that we finally took the time
To let me hear what you had on your mind
But in time, the right person will come around and make your heart feel stronger
You'll be his queen and everything else that comes in between
You know the sayin, one mans lost is another mans treasure
And when he finds the treasure in you, the queen will be cherished forever, forever, forever, forever.....
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Date Submitted: Jul 19, 2008 (01:21 PM)
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  cookedcoke02
07/31/08 (10:32 AM) 
most def a great write on both parts! u both have great talent! keep ur head up krazy much respect to u on da women 2 women note keep doin ya thing! much respect....10 starsz! keep pushin the pen!

  THE GOD WAR-CL...
07/20/08 (02:18 PM) 
Hot to death collabo poets. Definitely digging the emotions and passion pouring like so. Excellent..........

  Pookiejr
07/20/08 (01:49 AM) 
Man! the basic love affection. I love it though. Ya'll two did ya'll thang on this one. 10 stars all the way.

  N~Tyce
07/19/08 (01:27 PM) 
this is a very hot collab you two. very emotional and touching piece. i enjoyed it.

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