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"Wall Flower"
  by kayy


Yours arms look so inviting
And every look or glance could entice me
But my feet proceed with such resistance,
For those lips- I long to kiss them.

Your sent is overpowering
Just one whiff could send me cowering
I'll pass out, I'll lose all tension
But your hands- I'll truly miss them.

And my voice becomes so silent
And my heart gets very violent
But when these lips part it's amiss
For failures the cause of my loss of bliss.

And I try and try again
Though every attempts just a dead end
But you continue nonchalantly
For your eyes- I hope they pass me.
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Date Submitted: Oct 06, 2008 (06:07 PM)
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  CBlack
10/11/08 (11:09 AM) 
very intense feelings with a touch of suddleness...that may only make sense to me...i don't know, but good write

  Aloni
10/09/08 (12:55 PM) 
very cute and well written.. i like it mos def.. reminds me of my first love blues.

  rhymeslikedime...
10/06/08 (06:42 PM) 
you didnt plagerize this, did you sergent Love?? just checking, bc its reallly good. :]

  pozeup
10/06/08 (06:29 PM) 
I am feeling this one, very touching and you wrote it well. The flow was neat and word play was nice. I shall await for you to post more writes.. Good job.

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