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"Water Logged"
  by Laydii Lyric


You
violated me
ripping me of my innocence
in a sense
that made me feel ill
everytime
your name was uttered
.
.
.
sometimes made me
wonder if
you thought about me
if you were
sorry
for what you did
.
.
.
I can
remember you
forcing me to play
what you called
the
"touching game"
...
told me
not to tell
because of the drama caused
and the so called

''trouble''

I would be in
and now
our secret rests
here
with me in this
grave
I'm in
.
.
.
see you in hell

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Date Submitted: May 11, 2009 (10:37 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (14)
  Shye201
11/01/09 (02:32 PM) 
in the words of rose...wowzers....sis i'm literally cryin i can so relate...nice write

  leethal
09/13/09 (03:23 AM) 
WOW! this is what i call beautifully ugly words! i am still tingling from this piece! i admire you so much LL 4 gettin' naked on these sheets. u already know this drop has got 10s cumin bcuz thats all im allowed 2 give

  smooch
09/02/09 (05:15 PM) 
damn this was powerful it was deep love sa music da pic and ya words they melt together perfectly

  williesidney
06/30/09 (03:04 PM) 
Wow this was far out you blew my mind with this write just keep using that great gift you have I know you will nice really nice and a big ten stars.

  O-mEGA
06/14/09 (08:55 PM) 
There is an extreme sadness in this write that is felt from the very first stanza and is poured into each stanza to follow. Captivating write. 10+

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