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"we all live and die in a day"
  by MR.INTUITIVE
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it all happenes in a day...
love,breakup, makeups,and death it all happens in a day
will i live to be twenty eight and day later?
i doubt it, for everything happanes in a day
many lessons has been learned in this short life of mine
appriciations of all the victories in my life time
but I've learned how to give even when i was broke
though i know they use it it to buy crack or dope
turning down a sad face in need
i cannot...
but in these last few seconds
two face i remebered the most
the face that i learn to love
and the face i have to let go
so a sing this sad love song
she entered my life with a stop in time
so i may live for just a second longer
but when she left she took ten seconds with her
And though we tried to make it last
We both knew it wouldn't be long.
for i will not live to be twenty eight and day later?
I lie at night 11:59 and think about
1 minute till i die,i'm the one to blame
just two flowers in a withering in a vase
i cant bare the pain of my life ticing away
two flowers with no grounds
i guess it was destiny that your love fell apart with from this fellow
but for these last seconds i try to hold on to your last love letter
no tears to give this flower lfe all cried out,
this last cry,drip of being used.
though I'm guilty,
I was tired of being accused.
And so I spent my last seconds of my life
heart in pieces, a flower with no petals
but the last sudden seconds
Something happened; I expected it least.
God came to me and poured water on my face
giving me the life i need to live as a new born
this flower with no petals he will raise
so at the end that i may live a day later
love,breakup, makeups,and death it all happens in a day
but today before i die again
i want to tell you i love you!

to me time doesnt exist but if it were to exist it would coexist only in our mind.we all fall,rise and bleed in a day.it just depends on how hard of a day you have so feell me on this one.and soemone ask how can you believe a sinner?my answer to that is arent you one too.bless be with today for we all live for a day,may the lord pour his spiritual water apon you face so that we keep living to the next day,sorry to be so philosophical,because when we bleed thats when it's in time of need of jesus,youll see lol
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Date Submitted: Jul 28, 2009 (07:10 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (4)
Date: 07/30/09 (08:19 PM)
Author: MRZ. CRAZIIE
Poem Title: YOU HAVE TO LIVE LIF...

Date: 07/30/09 (04:55 AM)
Author: mariaseeyoulater
Poem Title: july

Date: 07/30/09 (04:11 AM)
Author: jansonthat
Poem Title: time

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  fame monster
10/15/09 (05:35 PM) 
dats da way it iz bleed cry etc dope shyt deep shyt makes u think wat could happpen 2 u in da nxt min

  Jazzy Storm
10/15/09 (05:15 PM) 
I love your take on time, and i totally agree with you. i do believe that everyday we lay our heads to rest god has to renew mis mercies and give us life, so in essence, it all does happen in a day. great, great scribe. loved it.

  jansonthat
07/30/09 (02:37 AM) 
i bet you're the quiet philosophico type huh,well i can picture it by your poems but this is best of all and oringinal,i had to read 10 times to get it lol but when i get the clue i realized this is got to be one of the sadess beautiful love peoms ive read and it comes from the heart and dont give this poem to her give it to me

  Jody
07/30/09 (01:00 AM) 
I like the concept of life happening in just one day... I don't know, I was just reading a story about ppl talking about time and there theory was the one where life happens in a parallel kinda of way where all the stages run together oppose to a linear fashion the way we think it happens, kinda like in the movie Deja Vu... time is really one of those complexities... I guess only God knows... enjoyed your take w/time.

  mariaseeyoulat...
07/28/09 (08:31 AM) 
you really felt that way its a sad poem but i like it it needs a touch from my pen to make it a amster piece.so can i have it?whats up with the sad poems have you been taking your happy pillls that make you see purple bunnies climbing on trees lately..you still dont believe i grew up to be this beautiful thing?you grew up nicely though you look more like a man now still got the baby face though thats what i like most.

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