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"We Speak"
  by Soule
  - This Poem is a response to the poem ...We talkin by One


Mixed minds
Set tones
That mix
Through phone -
Lines that connect
Internet-ically
Transmitted thoughts
Sought out
And bought with
Poetic affirmations
That barter
Emotions in translation
Tumbling within
Matrixed galaxies
0-1-0-0-1 combinations
Which reflect
Cryptic connotations
Hidden in the
Lime light
Sparks fly
Words dive
And sentences
Create solicitations
Sending
S
O
S
Representations
Colliding with
Balled fists
And Bic filled
Asteroids
And then…

~ Combustion ~

Of a thought filled
Super nova
Gets lost in an
Undefined black hole
Over shadowed by
That which is bright
That which is right
That which is us
Because
We are stars

Poets…

We Speak.
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Date Submitted: Feb 11, 2008 (09:24 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 02/14/08 (10:11 PM)
Author: One
Poem Title: We being...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (13)
  mindigoblue
04/12/08 (04:59 PM) 
Oh MY!!! This is fantastic! Not only putting a whole new light on the realm of poets...you've given us the universe. Beautifully expressed, your vision is awesome. i will be keeping this one for additional reading later. This was brilliant!

  Rootsie
04/06/08 (02:16 PM) 
The word flow is crazy in this piece. I was blown away, I read it from beginning to end twice, love the structure and how you used your words.. Keep that Bic flowing!!

  Rissa14
03/28/08 (08:44 AM) 
daggg...im really feeling this piece alot..yehh we speak..get all our words and emotions out..create things that people cant create normally..but im inspired..making me want to go and write this amazing spoken word poem that i would want to perform and it would have all this amazing rhy ing in it..with an amazing flow..lol..everything would just be amazing like this piece tthat you wrote. im feeling it. ten stars and a favorite. xoxo ♥Rissa

  D.K Lord of Da...
03/15/08 (11:34 AM) 
OF A THOUGHT FILLED SUPER NOVA GETS LOST IN AN UNDEFINED BLACK HOLE OVER SHADOWED BY THAT WHICH IS BRIGHT THAT WHICH IS RIGHT THAT WHICH IS US BECASUE WE ARE STARS..... SO WELL EXECUTED SO WELL PUT TOGETHER DEEP VISUALS AND EMOTION CUMMING THRU I SO LURV DIS PIECE SOULE, IM GONNA HAVE FAV DIS PIECE..

  *Rainbow*
02/28/08 (02:16 PM) 
Damn Damn Damn...That's ballistic. Really ballistic. It sounds like the extended version of Janet jackson's opening interlude of her new album, which is ballistic, so therefore this is really ballistic. Has a very futuristic/electronic/scientific/space age feel to it which is incredible. Yes indeed. You've done it again to me. lol. Much love.

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