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"Welcome To The Familly"
A Lil' Shadow and L!L M!ZZ ST@XZ 313 Collaboration


  L!L M!ZZ ST@XZ 313:

(ring...... ring.........ring)
hello bro are you there
please pick up i wanna talk to you

  Lil' Shadow:

Hey I'm here. what do u want to
talk about sis? I'm always here when u
need some one to talk to.

  L!L M!ZZ ST@XZ 313:

aye whats good
i gotta question i need
to ask you
is it true
about what i been hearing
you tying the knot with my sister
is a really true
that she is your future wife to be
please tell me
i need to hear these words
i know she dont know it yet
trust me i will never tell
but i just wanna hear it from you
so tell me are you really about to

  Lil' Shadow:

Nothing just chilling
yes it's true that im
tying the knot with your
sister, she deserve better
in life.

  L!L M!ZZ ST@XZ 313:

yea thats true
if only you knew
how much she cared
she tells me
all the time
how you make her day
bring a smile to her face
but i am guessin that
she doesnt kow yet
so when exactly
are you going to
ask her to take
that next step

  Lil' Shadow:

when the time is right?
she gone love to be happy
and enjoying the good life
to where she could smile
each and everyday. so how would u finish
this up sis

  L!L M!ZZ ST@XZ 313:

ok i see you bro
imma let you
do what you gotta do
and i support you
when ever you need advice
just he me up asap
i guess i will be
talkin to you later ok
bye bye

  Lil' Shadow:

Alright u just be careful and
watch over your sister thank
you for showing ur support
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Date Submitted: Sep 21, 2008 (12:44 PM)
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  StraY12
11/24/08 (05:20 PM) 
This was cute! nice collab, good topic also, good way to go back n forth, a heartfelt convo turned into a poem, I was feelin' this from beginnin' to end it had such nice imagery, both of y'all get 10 stars!

  baby girl oo7
09/21/08 (12:59 PM) 
awwww i feel so special omg...tears..i am speechless this was so unexspected i dont know what to say this is so sweet 10 stars from me and a fav

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