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"*~__^ WET RAIN *(CLOUDS) *VISITING ^___~*"
  by lavish


HOW DO I TELL U
IM SORRY ?

WEN ITS YA NAME
I KEEP CARVIN ON ME ?

I CAN SEE THE PAIN
IN YA EYES
DAMN OF ALL THEM
USELESS LIES

NEVA AMAGINED IT
TO GO THIS WAY

I REALIZE ITS
YOU I WANT TO STAY

HOW WILL I BREAK FREE ?
WEN UR THE IMAGE IN
MY MIND I ALWAYS SEE ?

I FEEL WET RAIN CLOUDS VISITING
ARE U LISTINING ?
ARE LOVE IS FINISHING

I DONT WANNA LIVE ON
WITH NOTHIN TO CALL MY OWN

I CANT HELP THE FEELIN
OF BEING ALONE

BUT NOW

THIERS A BIG BLACK HOLE
IN MY HEART
THAT U TORE APART

THAT EMPTEY SPACE
WERE U ONCE TOOK PART

SAYING GOOD BYE IS
SUMTHANG I FEAR

AND I
FEEL IT COMIN NEAR

AGAIN IT WOULD
BE JUST ANOTHA DRIED UP TEAR

MY CHAINS ARENT LET LOSE
HOW THEY USE TO
WEN I FIRST MET YOU

I FACE MY DAYS SO WET AND BLUE
AND IN THE END OF COURSE I LOST YOU
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Date Submitted: May 23, 2008 (04:34 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 05/30/08 (10:33 PM)
Author: OGSoldier4God
Poem Title: W.E.T. Rain

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comment icon  COMMENTS (25)
  K.A.S. THE LYR...
08/20/08 (11:28 PM) 
i can feel the pain of you letting someone go.nice way to describe and deal with it

  *Rainbow*
08/12/08 (12:07 PM) 
i feel that this such a very melodramatic plea... i like the style of your writing. both inside and out... like i feel as though all of your poems, together with its very unique construction of words, that it can be woven together into a book. It's very interesting.. Love it.

  _Poetic[Homo]c...
06/28/08 (01:29 AM) 
damn dats real heartbreakin!! but dis is deep ma

  * STiiCKY *
06/26/08 (02:00 PM) 
thisz isz a great write i cud feel everything yew described and said... ten starsz and mos def a fav

  TonySouthern
06/26/08 (09:36 AM) 
Like this write as well mi spitta. You seem real deep with it. Keep the pen pushing and keep putting it down. One love.

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