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"Wetness"
  by Poohbabi2010
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Bathe U by Tha Scorpion


Wetness does not always pertain to water
in an ocean, river or lake;
Sometimes it refers to how I feel
when I remember your embrace.

I only have to think of you
to remember me in your arms;
My legs quivering, my mouth moaning
I have fallen captive to your charms.

I long to feel your body on mine
to know the taste of satisfied love;
To lie quietly in your arms
we fit together like a hand to a glove.

You are the sweetheart of my life
you are my one sure bet;
You never have to wonder babe . . .
you can always keep me wet.
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Date Submitted: May 30, 2008 (09:32 PM)
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  J.L
03/15/09 (05:11 PM) 
you killed it!! I love this one,simplicity,with intensity,loved the flow,"you never have to wonder babe...you can always keep me wet" its stuff like that,that does what it does.10

  cybersamm
08/06/08 (06:25 AM) 
sweetness n wetness jolly good write without been sleazy i rate this as art...xxxxx

  angeleyes1
07/18/08 (04:11 PM) 
very nicely written and great response keep flowing with your words much love to you

  JustChuck
06/02/08 (02:15 AM) 
To this is classy erotic. Your thoughts are stimulating to the mind as well as the loins which can be hard to accomplish at times. You have a promising future with your lyrics I do very much believe.

  *Tha Scorpion*
05/30/08 (11:05 PM) 
Very nice response babygirl, wow, gotta say I wasn't expecting this, but I am pleased, this was hot.

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