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"What A Winter This Will Be"
  by *BMORES FINEST*


Leaves start to change colors and fall and scatter
Not that any of that matters but a matter of fact
The act should be taken into consideration
Because without no patients summer will take forever
So now were at the point where we hate it
See around winter time relationnships start to form
So blow your horn and get ready to be torn
Its the time of the year where girls need a man to keep warm
And the fellas want a girl they can call their own
But how long will those relationships last?
Some people are faithful and can last for months maybe years
Others only last till spring or summer and then come the tears
See this winter is optimistic and unrealistic
New set goals to hold on to
Winter for me is the time for development
Just to give yall a hint, get some since
When i say development i mean ready for the spring and summer
Stress is here at its best and theres not time for rest
The quest begins and yes there will be sins
This winter will make me a better person
I will stop with the lies and making females cry
Wait for that right woman to catch my eye
The one ill never say bye
More familly time,no more pain or yelling
Im telling you and you and you too
Take your time with this winter
You never know how it will be when you end it....
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Date Submitted: Jan 20, 2009 (12:28 AM)
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  Wrighter
06/05/09 (04:12 PM) 
I really enjoyed this piece, mostly because lately, the relationships around me, seemed to be falling apart, one by one, my friends suddenly ended their relationships- all around Summer time. I guess its something about the heat that means others act so odd. Usually when I think of Winter, I think of bitter cold and storms covering everything in Snow, but the way you describe Winter, made me thankful for the frigid season. 10 stars (NOTE: I would just fix some errors in regards to grammar and sp...
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  dontnohow
01/25/09 (11:50 PM) 
its the time of year girls need dudes to keep them warm...lol..okay... funny stuff...cuz I think its the other way around....but ill take my time this winter... 4 shure....cute .. 10+

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